The first four pages of a new comic I am commissioning from Arabatos. It's based on a "what if?" scene from the Monster Musume manga, the "Black Lily Farm" arc, and my current favorite character in the manga, Saane. I'm praying that new seasons of Monster Musume will come out, and that she'll make an appearance in the anime, because she's a lot of fun. And she's responsible for the moment in the manga where I legitimately fell out of my chair laughing.

Basically, Monster Musume tried to have a LITTLE subtlety about how damn THIRSTY the various monster girls are for the main character.

But then the satyrs show up, and subtlety died SCREAMING when they strolled into the bath while he was using it and said, "Heya, Newbie! LET'S FUCK~!" because goat-girls gonna goat, rofl.

Because I've seen some sites translating my commissions into Spanish, German, and etc, I'll throw them a bone and release the "clean" versions of these pages as well. Though the circumstances might change for the rest of the comic, depending on the situation.

Also, pages 5, 6, 7, and 8 have been released in sketch form on a twitter I've been using, just fyi. Shouldn't be too hard to find, I think. So if you want a preview of those, go ahead and check them out.

A further note, there is no impregnation going on in this comic. Yes, I'm spoiling something that'll be said in the next pages and explained further in, but I wanted to note that now so it wouldn't get improperly tagged.

UPDATE 7/25/2023

Pages 14, 15, 16, and 17 uploaded.

If Page 16 looks familiar to anyone, it's because that page has actually been floating around for awhile. It was the first "test run" page for this comic to see if I liked how Saane looked in Arabatos' art style. Obviously, I was very pleased with the result since I went ahead with this comic idea at all, lol.

There's not text on three of these pages, and that is intentional, because when I first thought of this comic, I actually had the weird idea for it to be ENTIRELY text-less, and let the plot be conveyed entirely through visual cues and facial expressions.

But then I started having too much fun with the dialogue, and everything just spiraled from there.

However, I made the references for Pages 13, 14, and 15 VERY early into this idea, during the "textless" plan. And thus I wasn't really able to wrap my head around making any dialogue for these pages in particular at this point. So I said, "Fuck it" and I'm tossing those pages out without anything cluttering them up.

I couldn't resist adding dialogue to Page 17 though, mostly because I have too much fun trying to write speech for someone who is on cloud 9 in some form or another, lol.

The next update will NOT be for the orgy with 3 satyrs that were standing guard for Saane however. I had some INTENSE ideas suddenly jump into my head, and I realized that there probably SHOULD be SOMETHING for the 2 satyrs who are part of the "distraction orgy" on page 1. So the next update will be 2 bonus pages involving "Tokara" and "Nubii" (their names on the wiki) and 2 pages in my other gallery for random Arabatos stuff. (2 "test" pages for characters that I have a comic idea for, and I wanted to see how they look in his art style; Ben Winchester and Jodie Beretta from an OLD webcomic called "Loserz". Fuck you, it's my nostalgia, I'll do what I want with it, lol)

UPDATE 5/16/2023

Been awhile, but it's been a new case of kinda feeling like shit, for several reasons. PLUS it didn't help that arabatos was busy with other commissions for awhile and I can't fault him for making money.

Anyway, Page 13 is here, and this one was a little bit of a pain, because it's a fine line between a woman acting like a bitch (in a teasing way) and being a CUNT, and I hope I was able to make Saane seem like the former, not the latter.

It'll be 4 pages after these, though there will be a bit of a joke because ONE of those pages is going to be the "test run" page that I originally commissioned from Arabatos a few years ago, when I wanted to see how Saane looked in his art style. And obviously, I wasn't disappointed.

Speaking of, 2 more "sample pages" for a future idea are going to be put in my other gallery for random Arabatos comic pages and ideas, these ones are for a Ranma 1/2 comic idea involving Kasumi and Shampoo. Check them out, if you have the chance.

UPDATE 11/30/2022

Okay, Pages 9, 10, 11, and 12 are here, and also to prevent some confusion and disorganization with the gallery, I deleted the blank pages and my lame attempt at spanish pages. I might load them into an imgur album and put the link here at a later date.

Truth told, I've had these pages since August, but due to family stress and a severe lack of support, I had NO confidence in the writing I was going to put into these pages, and I didn't want to release them completely blank. But I've got these out and while I'm still not 100% gleeful with them, I think they're good enough to release. (it was a case of too many ideas for Page 10, mostly)

UPDATE 5/26/22

Despite a few delays, Pages 9, 10, 11, and 12 will hopefully be coming soon.

UPDATE: 1/20/22

Pages 5, 6, 7, and 8 are coming out faster than I expected, pretty much because I wasn't second-guessing myself on the dialogue, sound effects, and speechbox placement the entire time...I had help and I really didn't want to keep him waiting on me to stop being self-conscious.

Also, rather than having Clean versions for these pages to assist any translators, I decided to try translating them into Spanish myself. I'll let y'all know when those might be ready.

excelent work!

arabatos should keep the design of women like this, in some jobs they seem to be injected with airplane oil / sad

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> A further note, there is no impregnation going on in this comic

Son, I am disappoint.

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I actually really like the dialogue in this. Well done.

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