Hello everybody, this is the second story which I have right now in progress (Correction to the image at the end)

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https://ouo.io/pG0ieH

All opinions are always welcome :)

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Great work! I like the slow, non-magical transition and the fact that he's against it. It's exactly the kind of story I love! I'm hoping the story will keep the focus on body modifications and not on forcing him on a relationship with another man (just a personal preference, I find that too many stories of this kind end up that way). In any case, thank you and keep up the good work!

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I would've preferred if she started to enjoy the transition at some point, rather than being gaslit and abused by her girlfriend. Maybe at some point she decides she's sick of the abuse and leaves on her own while she continues transitioning.

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please ignore rock_zeppelin

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this story is just depressing honestly

Last edited on 14 November 2022, 01:27.

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What program do you use to make these comics?

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Honestly feels less pornogrhapic and more like a pyshological thriller where you are hoping the protagonist finds a way out

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Your pace with this story is just perfect. Not too slow, neither too quickly

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4u29MoqY01k

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Man…you are genious… The detailed description of gradual psycological change is soooo good!

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Nice story, i like how is progressing so far. I would like it better if there is more revenge in it.

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Agreed with Carjua. Our protagonist better get back at those two in the end, both his ex-gf and Javier. The fact he continued to force her to do stuff for months is pretty fucked up as far as relationships go.
I mean... I suppose this can be another one of those comics where the assholes win in end. But it feels like thats the vast majority of tg related stuff online.

She needs to find a way to make the transition hers. Undo what was done to her, at least in some sense (like presenting as male for a while) and perhaps even stop taking hormones before choosing to return to it. Maybe not that but something equivalent where she isn't just going with momentum. And if she does end up with Javier, it has to be after a big break in their relationship where he doesn't just say "Lol whats done is done" and gaslight her while he abuses her. If he's not going to literally cry like a bitch then he doesn't deserve to end up with her.

I just think it'd be nice if the ending wasn't "The Abusers Win."

Your writing is pretty good though!

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Angry Latina Goth Trans Personal Trainer ticks a lot of boxes for me, not gonna lie. That’s why I’m doubly impressed; I’m not just fapping to this story, I’m really invested in how this turns out for Matthew/Jasmine. Thank you, and please keep it coming.

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Please don't let it be a win for the abusers, for Matt's ex gf, and for Javier, they both deserve bad shit happening to them

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SHIIIT YESSSS... The newest addition! Now its not her fighting others, its her fighting herself!

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