I've said it before, and I'll say it again: this is trash. If you can't tell a decent comic story - of any genre - in 50 pages, then you need to transition to writing books.

Because even setting aside the fact that this is a nearly sexless *fetish comic,* it remains a directionless, plodding, plotless nightmare. I mean, FFS, why is the heroine such an unlikable and on-the-nose self-insert?

Imagine all the 20-25 page satisfying porn comics this guy could have churned out over the last two years. Then look at this monstrosity. SMH.

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this is by far one of the worst things i've ever read. didn't even get a half-chub. flaccid through and through. in fact, i think my penis actually got smaller while reading this. can't even read it for the plot because its so dogshit. but not the funny dogshit where it's ironically bad, it's just unreadable.

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Re: p. 287 - you know, once upon a time, we could rely on a pointless fight like this breaking down into *at least* some frenching. But now, you know that isn't what's going to happen. This content has become angst-driven drama with a little smear of smut. Like, what even IS this anymore? Who is it intended for? I feel like I'm reading dirty Babysitters Club.

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I dont understand the hate from you two.

It's kinda fun to read and not everything has to be super smutty. The artist probably enjoys drawing it for themselves and thats good too. It's not like you are paying for reading it.

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I've written at length in other iterations of this gallery as to why I think Kip's soul is black and his work is garbage, Bookrat. But, to keep it brief: the dude built his reputation on smut that was tight and to the point, but cashed in on the losers who fund trash like this by teasing out every speck of dialogue, every scene, and every plot element to an insane degree. He's not telling a story - he's farming a field of patreon simps.

I'm not inherently opposed to story-driven pornography, either. In fact, I rather enjoy it. But this is neither porn nor, really, a story anymore. It's just kind of a rolling mass of disparate ideas and loose ends, glazed in a sheen of fanservice. In a nutshell: Kip's work is getting to the point where I'm starting to doubt it belongs on this site (I'm not going to petition for its removal or anything. But ask yourself: is this hentai? No. Is it really pornographic? We'd had ONE nipple flash in 300 pages. So no on that account, too).

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@battleshipGascogne

Lack of taste is a covid symptom, get tested

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@BattleshipGascogne This comic sucks, for sure, but are you high effort trolling or something? Give it a rest dog, this isnt gonna get any better

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@ScaleFap

I agree, you should be tested. Kip is utter dogshit. people compare this to ayano's diary but that's not fair at all. ayano's diary is actually good. theres progression happening and the story feels authentic, and gives you SOMETHING to work with even if it's very light. it's a fun read regardless if you consider it hentai or not. kip's crap is just that. crap. it doesn't fit in any other criteria other than crap.

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The comic is just a never-ending tease without even minor payoffs. If you actually read it, it's spun off in like 15 different directions at this point without ever tying up loose ends or closing arcs.

I write books for a living - I'm not inherently opposed to a narrative. But there actually has to *BE* a fucking narrative. This comic is schizophrenic - it doesn't know what it is, what it wants, what it's shooting for. The main character is soulless, small and mean; the supporting cast is either stupid or helpless (or evil), and despite lots of things happening, nothing even remotely meaningful ever occurs.

And, of course, THAT'S IGNORING THE FACT THAT IT'S ONLY THIS LONG BECAUSE HE'S FARMING THESE PATREON SIMPS FOR ALL THEY'RE WORTH. Real artists - even smut artists - prioritize creation over cashflow. They want to make a thing first, and also get paid. Kip creates JUST for income, and it's reflected in his work.

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