the story kinda feels rushed? 1 day pregnancy. kinda boring, would made for a more interesting story he expanded upon it abit. Could have made it so that getting pregnant as quickly after the fusion had some interesting side effects. Story feels a bit ups and downs, at times pretty shoddily written because everything gets compressed and rushed, other times very well written with intersting topics and stories. Although it sometimes hits you with a wall of text.
But why am I even critising this? I'm here to fap. But got invested into the story instead. damn.
I'm honestly just waiting for the mom to get absorbed by the cat bioroid and for the bioroid to then rape the spoiled brother to death. Seems like a pretty hot way to end their plotline -with super kinky femdom incest sex. Give the neckbeard what he wants in the most violent and twisted way possible