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[TRY] Rumor Has It That The New Chairman of Disciplinary Committee Has Huge Breasts. [English] (Ongoing) (Updated, June 15th)

新しい風紀委員長は胸が大きいという噂がある

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Posted:2023-06-15 22:23
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Language:English  TR
File Size:28.36 MB
Length:39 pages
Favorited:756 times
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Posted on 15 June 2023, 22:23 by:   NudeSalad     PM
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I think I fixed most of the stuffs. I'm sorry if you guys see any errors.

Edit: There's no textless version of BJ scene and the glassless version is a complete redraw of korean translator.

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Posted on 15 June 2023, 22:30 by:   Fistonladin     PM
Score +12
That was really hot. She has such a... Weird personnality, but i think it's great !
Posted on 15 June 2023, 22:45 by:   meganekov3     PM
Score +5
Glancing over, there are still a lot of random full stops and crossbar I should only be used for the personal pronoun “I”. Also, you can edit a gallery instead of creating a new one :)
Posted on 15 June 2023, 23:12 by:   GreenIN     PM
Score +12
@Fistonladin the power of emotionless
Posted on 16 June 2023, 03:20 by:   cutegyaru     PM
Score +35
>I think I fixed most of the stuffs.
Nah. You just "fixed" what I pointed out, which was a fraction of your mistakes (you actually added more mistakes on the same pages, and that's hilarious). I'm not surprised you stopped where I stopped.

Also you can update your galleries, just saying.

p.7 Commitee
p.8 there appear
p.9 your tits what H cup is it
p.11 where would you like? > like... to what?
p.12 after she clean
p.15 did you heard
p.15 i heard she's got H cup > cups
p.15 use me to your desire > as you desire (sounds bad either way)
p.16 after Yamada-san calmed down > calms
p.17 i used up all condoms
Posted on 16 June 2023, 07:02 by:   NudeSalad     PM
Score -15
Sorry for the errors @cutegyaru, but I'm not giving up until I can walk again lol. Still, at this point just point out all the mistakes bro. Really wish I translate this in my own language, but all I got is a laptop with only English alphabets printed on the keys, a mouse, and a fucking touch keyboard. I know I'm making excuses. if I'm going to make my own language translation, it would take me a full 5 minutes just to click all the vowels, the alphabets, and customizing the fonts just to form a text bubble. I also used Grammarly (Yes, that site in the ad) to check most of the text, So I thought it might be decent enough.

Look man, really sorry for bad English and the typos. Just comment all the mistakes I made, I'll fix it when TRY update this series.

Edit: I don't really see any problem you pointed at on page 8, 9, and 15 (cup).
Last edited on 16 June 2023, 10:22.

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