As you can see this is R-18G so of you don't like guro, this ain't the place.

Also this is my first time translating something so some criticism is definitely appreciated.

1 -> Cover
2-74 -> Short hair version
75-147 -> Long hair version
148-149 -> Bonus picture

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For me the translation looks credible. Good edit too. But idk haven't read to the end. Thanks for the translation

Edit: the translation is might be confuse my brain sometimes.

Last edited on 09 June 2023, 06:49.

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Nice TL.
Way better than most stuff I've seen recently.
Really thankful for this TL m8.

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@luckyhusky I think it's because
1. I use a lot of scientific term, most of it is justified but I think I should trim it down a bit.
2. It is read from right to left. I probably fix this by making the right text placed higher than the left text to make sure how people will read the text.
3. I use justify text which may make a lot extranous space between words. In hindsight I should've just used align center

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Was good until like page 23.

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