Hey guys. This is the english translation for the complete edition of There's Something Loose In Her Head. This is a remake of the first 30 chapters of NT00's series.

Original English Gallery: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2418769/f0086b379f/

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2/24/23 - Chapter 1
2/28/23 - Chapter 2
3/30/23 - Chapter 3
3/31/23 - Chapter 4
4/07/23 - Rest of Delusion 4-2 Added
6/01/23 - Chapter 5 and 6

Also great news! NT00 says chapter 2 will be released by the end of February so it'll be out in a couple days!

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god bless you.

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i really wish that he kept the small areola from before it's so big now

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Tag 'story arc'

>Requires a minimum of ~75 pages or 4 chapters, whichever comes first, within a single gallery.

https://clk.sh/s2yQy1

29 pages, one chapter IS NOT FUCKING ENOUGH to justify the tag.

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@Pseudo-Nim
I guess the uploader is banking on the fact that there would be at least 600 pages by the time nt00 finished remaking the first 30 chapters
but yea I sort of agree that he need to wait for the rest of the chapters to get remake before putting the tags prematurely. We never know what would happened. What if nt00 died next week and no more upload came?

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is it being released in parts?

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@Pseudo-Nim

Whoa, sorry about that, I understand the tagging is serious business here and I definitely did not know about that requirement, haha.

@viltras

Yup, definitely did that prematurely, but yeah I for sure think it'll reach the criteria soon.

@bonerdragon

Yes, NT00 is writing these out chapter by chapter. Since this is a remake of the original 30 chapters, he might be releasing more than 1 chapter per month. (There will be 2 chapters this month)

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I WANT TO GET OFF FROM MR. NT00's WILD RIDE

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Wow I gotta admire the fact that now that his art has improved he went back to redo his first part of the story.

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Wait, why's he remaking it? Is he planning on changing anything??

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@iGetTurnOnby2D He's making the timeline clearer and IIRC giving more context for Yumi's backstory. The ending will not change, though. He's pretty much just refining the original story.

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@Hurray456 was there even a definite ending? Last upload for the latest chapter was the December chapter and a IF version.

How does it even end? And does the artist plan to end it? O_O

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@BlitzZ21

The series technically only has 30 chapters with a definitive ending, the uploads kind of screwed it over by not keeping his chapter numbering the same and just releasing them as is. The last chapter is where Haru and Yumi have lots of raw sex and confirm their love for each other and then she asks if he’d like to have her sleep again with someone and he doesn’t answer and then it has a title drop. Everything after that is up in the air canon wise since technically it’s all bonus material of dubious canonicity. Of course we can expect it to be canon (except the IF route from Christmas) for the most part but technically NT00 can come out and say any or all of it is not. This includes 99% of Jin stuff, the development of Yura, and the most recent Christmas releases. Once again uploads on here and elsewhere put everything together and make no mention of the actual canon series ending so it makes sense you didn’t know that.

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If it inspires the artist to make more of his animated stuff with Yumi too, I'm in.

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The reason for the remake is obvious, I can't think of a good story, and there are people who want a sex scene between a senior and Yumi, so they try to catch supporters by adding scenes to the old story. Because I know NT00 is not easy to make money without Yumi. NT00, you really knows how to make money. Two years would have had enough time to make a complete version.
at this time, going to make a complete version? Would you have thought of making the complete version if it wasn't for the end of the year fuss? NT00, you really great.

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Yea the updated art is nice and all but not really interested in art without a story. Already know what happens. I'm basically just waiting to see how the author recovers from his last chapter fumble. This is nice to look at but it's like eh.

At best it gives more material for people doing rewrite/alternate sequels or whatever like that one that got released recently was decently done. People got interested in this author because his stories were interesting. The art being nice is a bonus but nice looking hentai girls are a dime a dozen. Its the narrative of who she is that gets the dick hard and makes the heart skip a beat.

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This is basically vanilla... CRINGE... I really can't get off to "delusions" since in the back of my mind I know it didn't really happen.

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^ literally why the series is popular is because it's at its core something vanilla learning and yumi depicted as more than a street walking thot. Problem with ntr is it fetishize destruction so you'll never be satisfied no matter how many series end in it, since the final and complete form of destruction is death.

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I thought you'll use the nipple piercing version lol

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Actually yeah, looking at the untranslated release it would seem that the delusions should have the nipple piercings and the non-pierced versions are just bonuses.

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@Z556 @Kileraa

It was originally nipple piercing in the delusion, however NT00 said he made a mistake with the layers so it’s actually supposed to be no piercings in the delusion and piercings as the bonus.

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@steveyolo80

Ah, that makes sense.

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What is complete edition ?!

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ok ok ok, so this is the remake right?

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Hey guys, chapter 3 just came out and chapter 4 will be out in a few days. Due to being busy with some stuff I won't be able to get translations out. I'm still planning on translating but will probably get them all out at once in May. Sorry about that, see you all then!

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The art is so much better he has really improved a lot

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Still busy but screw it, you only live once, so I translated chapter 3. Chapter 4 should be coming out tomorrow!

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Please update the torrent

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连发！最高！

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Giga chad translator

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wasn't this supposed to be a remake telling more about her relationship with her senpai? why is she already with jin?

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@steveyolo80 are you gonna be translating chapter 4, too?

@RodrigoRGM she's not, that's part of Haru's delusion.

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@Hurray456

Yep, just uploaded chapter 4.

My thoughts on the remake are that I really appreciate the slight changes NT00 have made, while also showing his improved art to make all the old Yumi CG even hotter. Though I definitely feel less excitement since the overall plot points are largely unchanged and I know what's coming, I'll be looking forward to his christmas chapter (ch24 in the old version) and perhaps all the Yura stuff either remade as official canon or just continuing from the events of last Christmas.

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damn it i just want to see this faggot get completely cucked and forgotten, he doesn't deserve shit

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I'd say its likely he redoes the second half too since it's free money. It was obvious the part he got pooped on was making more story since his art just keeps improving but the story deteriorated for months, and frankly the art is the easy part but he did craft a great story for a long long time. He should have continued that mina story it seemed like he let ideas from that spill over to yumi since shes so wildly popular just using her instead was likely to make the sales. I can imagine most of these artists dont make that much so any profiteering they can do is likely to happen. Mans gotta eat.

Still kinda salty about the meme way he ended the story.

Tbh he should leave the yura stuff as alternate as opposed to official canon. The first story ends on a better note for him to make the yura stuff canon hed have to continue writing it in a way that doesnt leave a bunch of the fan base sour over trying to go halfsies.

All I wanted was to see yumis internal dialogue and for it to end vanilla lmao.

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@valesauce He did say he wanted to continue drawing Mina stuff, so there's that at least.

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This way hotter if it went true ntr without delusion part.

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Clearly she's not the only one with something loose in their head...

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NT00 just added the rest of the 4-2 Delusion scene as he didn't finish it in March. Looking forward to chapters 5 and 6 the end of this month.

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Kinda surprised at the slow releases given that he has the base of the art and the entire story finished. Unless it's just deliberate end of month releases for like patreon ticks.

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NT00 released chapter 5 and chapter 6 will prob come at the end of April. I’m really busy with school atm and will post both April and May translations at next update at the end of May.

NT00 also said May will probably go back and do Mina chapters so we prob won’t see ch 7 and 8 for May.

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>C’MON HONEY PUSH! PUSH! YOU CAN DO THIS! I CAN’T WAIT TO SEE THAT BEAUTIFUL DUSKY FACE LOOKING AT ME!
>C’MON! YES! YES! I CAN SEE IT! IT’S, IT’S
>...
>what
>What?
>WHAT. THE. FUCK.
>THIS IS A WH*TE BABY! WHAT THE FUCK! YOU BITCH! YOU LYING FUCKING CUNT THIS IS A WH*TE BABY WHAT THE FUCK HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE YOU WERE ONLY SUPPOSED TO SLEEP WITH TYRONE!!!
>YOU SCOOPED UP SOME OF MY CUM DROPS?! BECAUSE YOU WANTED A CHILD WITH THE MAN YOU LOVE? YOU TREACHEROUS CUNT!!!! I KNEW I SHOULD OF GOTTEN THAT VASECTOMY!!! I THOUGHT IT WAS SUSPICIOUS THAT YOU ARGUED AGAINST IT BUT I FIGURED IT WAS FINE BECAUSE I NEVER HAD SEX WITH YOU!!! I NEVER THOUGHT YOU’D STAB ME IN THE BACK LIKE THIS!!!
>OH MY SCIENCE, I’M RUINED!!! YOU’VE RUINED ME YOU STUPID TWAT!!! MY WIFE GAVE BIRTH TO A WH*TE BABY!!! AND A BOY TOO!!! IF IT WAS A WH*TE GIRL I COULD AT LEAST LOOK FORWARD TO GIVING HER UP TO TYRONE ONCE SHE STARTED MENSTRUATING BUT I CANT DO THAT WITH A WH*TE BOY NOW CAN I??? IM GONNA BE THE LAUGHINGSTOCK OF THE KEKOLD COMMUNITY NOW!!! THEIR GONNA THINK IM A FUCKING NAZI RETHUGLICAN NOW!!! THIS IS THE WORST DAY OF MY LIFE!!!
>GIVE ME THAT WH*TE BABY RIGHT NOW IM GONNA BREAK ITS FUCKING NECK!!!! I’M GONNA SMASH THAT WH*TE FUCKING BABYS FUCKING SKULL UNDERNEATH MY MY RICK AND MORTY FLIPFLOPS!!!! GIVE IT TO ME YOU LYING NAZI CUNT OR ILL CUT YOU A NEW HOLE IN YOUR FUCKING THROAT!!! GIVE IT TO ME YOU BITCH GIVE IT GIVE IT GIVE IT!!!!! IN THE NAME OF JEFRE CANTU-LEDESMA I'M GOING TO FUCKING KILL IT!
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⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣎⢏⢿⠘⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⡟⢠⡦⢋⡜⢠⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣤⣝⠻⢿⣿
⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣧⡢⡓⠘⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡇⢐⣥⡦⣋⣴⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣶⣦
⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣜⠄⢸⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡇⡿⢿⣾⣟⣛⡛⡻⠿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿
⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡆⠀⢞⣜⡾⣛⣭⢿⡇⢟⣹⣫⡻⣝⢟⠿⡠⠀⣶⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣶⣦⣼⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿
⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣧⡄⡺⠝⡼⢻⡘⠃⡇⣇⢿⡇⣟⠀⡘⠋⣴⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿
⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⡷⡇⡆⣬⣈⣒⣁⣁⣑⣚⣟⣁⣠⣠⡿⠟⢉⣀⣉⠉⣁⣈⡉⠛⠛⠛⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿
⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠋⣤⣤⣴⣤⣦⣤⣤⣈⣉⣉⣉⠛⠛⠛⠛⠛⠁⣼⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣶⣿⣧⣄⠙⢿⣿⣿⣿
⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡏⢠⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣇⢘⡙⠛⠛
⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡇⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠀⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡗⢸⣿⣿⠀
⣿⣿⠿⠟⠋⣉⣉⣉⡉⠻⠿⣿⣿⣿⠃⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣌⣉⣉⣀⠙⠿⠛⢉⡉⠛⠿⠟⢁⣾⣿⣿⠐
⡿⠋⣠⣶⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣶⣦⣤⣈⣉⣀⠛⠛⠛⠿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣶⣾⣿⣿⣷⣶⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⠀
⠁⣼⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣦⣄⠙⣿⣭⠉⣉⣉⡉⢹⡿⠛⠛⠻⣿⣿⣿⡿⠿⠿⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⠠
⠀⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠛⠛⠛⠛⠛⠻⠿⠿⠁⣿⣿⠀⡙⠀⣧⣼⡿⠃⣴⡀⢻⣿⠁⣴⣶⣶⠀⣽⡇⢠⡌⢉⡉⢹⣿⣿⡇⢸
⡅⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡟⠀⡄⢸⣿⣿⣶⣶⣶⣾⡿⠏⠰⢿⣶⣿⣿⠇⣌⣉⣁⢸⣿⠀⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣦⣿⡇⢸⣧⣸⣿⣿⠃⣸
⠅⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⠋⣠⣾⡇⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣶⣶⣤⣼⣿⣤⣤⣤⣿⣉⣀⣽⣦⣈⣉⣉⣡⣽⡿⠿⠂⠛⠿⣿⣿⣿⠀⣿

Base +6, Who is John Galt? -6, Guilty Thighs -5, XXXnista -6, ScarletDemon -6, darkfishy -9, medkittestspeed -7, gamer325 -10, Johnstar096 -5, Fiercerunner -6, schwitt -6, wegkhwegue54 -6, HyperHiro -7, and 44 more...

Absolute legend

Base +6, HyperHiro -7, Yukiuramshi -6, Shallfallen -6, Ai Aihara -9, autismheh -6, asdsasddsdsddd +6, Bogh -6, chipish3312 +6

where is the greater development that senpai would have in this version? why are we already with jin's part?

Base +12, Halexis578 +6, asdsasddsdsddd +6, Budda001 +6

Alright guys, just posted Chapter 5 and 6, will try and get the Mina chapters up in its respective gallery as fast as I can. Enjoy!

Base +9, messu +22, jos52 +5, Lollers6969 +6, oldjin +10, WheldrakeX +19, elmothor +6, Budda001 +6

Japanese (RAW): http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2550388/f78f2ce1bf/
Chinese (Translation): http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2543898/42f03e2fbd/

Base +42, elmothor +6