Hi! I'm Rising Sun-kun and I'm making my translating/typesetting debut with this doujin. I decided on Dot Eito's Vicky doujin because she carried my hard last GW and she finally debuted on Priconne (jumped ship from global btw).
I was planning to do volume 4 as well but someone beat me to the punch since as you can see, I went too gung ho for a debut work and cleaned up even the sfx, which was extremely time consuming. But, hey, in a skills standpoint, it was good way to gauge if I could do it or not.

But, anyway, if you liked what you saw, please feel free to message my socials for commissions!
I'm still learning so i think my prices are fair...

I'll still be working on some untranslated GBF doujins for free for more practice so please look forward to them! These next ones won't take as long because not gonna bother with the SFX this time!

Socials:
FB: Rising Sun Translations
Twt: https://elii.cc/sofe

Hmyeah, I'd try to get the basics down before asking for commissions.

1. You're using the wrong 1280x downsized resolution. Originals are at 2070 x 3027. Download the archive or the non-downsized torrent.
2. You need to level scans that have faded colors. Guide below.
3. You're working in RGB when you should be working in greyscale for black and white pages.
4. A lot of your bubbles have dust in them (poorly cleaned JP text).
5. Pretty impressive doing full SFX for a first release, but you might want to match the styling too. Right now, you have ONE font for every SFX. Kinda weird. Also, don't use *.
6. You should be centering your text. Guide below.
7. Why is this tagged as a rewrite?
8. (Using honorifics for yourself is weird.)

Guides:

General: https://ouo.io/rxLoMa
Typesetting: https://gplinks.co/35OwR
Redrawing: https://ouo.io/kLX6K4
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630
Leveling: /img/e-hentai/attachments/902314557077336064/997654450149789757/optimize_image.jpg

Your TL looks okay, so no real comment on that.

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The guides are appreciated, thank you so much!

The pen name was a group joke that stuck so I'm just going with it www

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