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[Sumiyao] Nakadashi MP Kaifukuman Tanetsuke Dungeon Hen Chapter 1

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Posted:2023-05-12 10:59
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Language:Japanese  
File Size:110.2 MB
Length:156 pages
Favorited:38 times
Rating:
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Posted on 12 May 2023, 10:59 by:   Rozmark     PM
Uploader Comment
This is Machine Translation, some words are misspelled,wrong pronounced or even broken, if anyone wanna fixed it, it'll be helpfull.

All credits goes to the artist Sumiyao
hoohttps://www.pixiv.net/users/7246
Posted on 12 May 2023, 12:45 by:   gigasgmx     PM
Score +32
Mad props to you for putting the fact that this is machine translated on the gallery cover.

Here's some suggested grammar fixes (not translation fixes! I don't speak a lick of japanese!) from a native english speaker:
Based on the manga's name, "Labyrinth" should probably be "Dungeon" in almost all instances. Labyrinth would be more correct in a vacuum, but dungeon is the accepted terminology in the adventure fantasy genre that this is clearly operating in.
pg 7: "I felt an illusion that there was a huge hole at my feet, and I felt fear" is definitely wrong.
pg 9: "Ymir, you followed me when I decided to become an adventurer --an old friend of mine" --> "Ymir--an old friend of mine--followed me when I decided to become an adventurer."
pg 10: "This area has always been unexplored by monsters." --> "This area has always been unexplored because of monsters."

More later--my ADHD won't let me make any more progress right now.
Posted on 12 May 2023, 13:11 by:   Rou123     PM
Score +10
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