nice i love it when porn has an actual story and its a good one too so nice x2

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Couldn't help but laugh at reading this one myself. But if it were me I would have thrown out the mom and brother big time.

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the story kinda feels rushed? 1 day pregnancy. kinda boring, would made for a more interesting story he expanded upon it abit. Could have made it so that getting pregnant as quickly after the fusion had some interesting side effects.
Story feels a bit ups and downs, at times pretty shoddily written because everything gets compressed and rushed, other times very well written with intersting topics and stories.
Although it sometimes hits you with a wall of text.

But why am I even critising this? I'm here to fap. But got invested into the story instead. damn.

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I like this, need more.

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The colors...

MY EYES

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