Machine translation? Because I can't possibly see how a human translator could consider "If you're kidding me, I'm going home" - "making fun of you?" as a reasonable conversation, even without her obviously repeating his words back to him. And then there's of course the questionable typesetting and occasional mistakes like some sentences starting in lower case only making the whole thing even more of a headache to read...

Base +8, Nakama_P +6