This time I tried to be more careful with grammar, and again, I translated the Spanish translation made by @LeisureScan

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Chinese version: https://ouo.io/bf5TqW

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Fucking gold

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Thanks for the translations, love this artist's works.

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p.17 it came out a lot - you came a lot

Page 5
Your TL: Whenever I think of the hero
JP: 弄ると
Intent: Not whenever, but specifically when she 弄ると

Page 11
Your TL: Ok
JP: 大丈夫だよ・・・
Intent: She's not agreeing, but reassuring

Page 12
Your TL: You're sucking
JP: 吸い込んで
Intent: Ironically, there's a difference between sucking up and sucking

Page 17
Your TL: After all, this isn't enough
JP: やっぱり足りなかったよ・・・
Intent: Seems to be more a result of poor English, but the "after all" makes it sound like she's justifying a previous statement when it's a continuation of what she says earlier in the doujin. "Yeah, this is [still] not [nearly] enough..."

Base +22, BlueSmoke +9, dankestdungeon +24

where is chapter 4?

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