Hi! PearL here! thanks for reading, this one is not really focused on the story aspect, but the feminization so it will be a short one. i plan on doing a couple of these short stories each taking on a different aspect of feminization
Pacing is definitely way to fast but the model work is good.
Pacing is something you just have to figure out as you go. Some people write too fast, some write too slow. It happens. You'll find the right tempo eventually if you keep at it.
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