Prologue (pre-rewrite): A former model, Lou, has her career destroyed by her Gardevoir, Eerie, when Eerie became a porn-star; She decides to take back the reins of her life, as Eerie tries her best to repair their broken relationship. (p1-p57)

CH1 (pre-rewrite): Lou is forced to face her past actions and discover her family history. (p58-p114)

Hiatus & Rewrite blog: http://elii.cc/degrlm

CH2: The full story of the fall of Eerie and Lou and how they finally move on together. Meanwhile, the Lacroix family has not forgotten its missing heir, and Laure's actions have consequences beyond her complicated relationship with her daughter. (p115-p155)

CH3: Lou and Eerie decide to take the next step in their chosen fields, working together to reach higher heights. To this end, they have to step out of their comfort zone. Meanwhile, Laure learns how to be a mother while trying to preserve her daughter from family intrigues. (ongoing)

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Due to the previous user-maintained gallery containing Patreon-exclusive contents, as well as unreleased content (unused concepts and such, redbubble store material), I decided that if I was going to request its deletion, I would create and maintain a gallery myself so e-hentai HMGBAPS readers wouldn't lose an easy and accessible place to read the comic. On that note, I want to thank the people who aggregate and rendered my (non Patreon-exclusive) content accessible here for their dedication!

The previous gallery had a wide range of content, from Shorts and additional arts, but it seemed to make updates hard to find for users. Please let me know if you would prefer me to aggregate ALL HMGBAPS non-comic side content (character sheets, concepts, etc) here, or in a separate gallery.

HMGBAPS is updated on Friday weekly.

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12/02/2022: Added the Shorts after the chapters they appear in so events appears in the chronological order they're supposed to! Please forgive the file naming, I mistakenly referenced the e-hentai page number rather than the original files name, which I belatedly realized; Made sure everything is in the right order manually, removed some of the Shorts that are no longer considered canon post rewrite... I consider redrawing and expanding the whole Clem/Aya arc, as well.

Separate galleries work best, I think. Really, as long as the newest page can just be found at the end of this gallery, we can follow along.

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Honestly while I know it sucks to have your patreon-exclusive content leaked this is probably the best that could've happened.

Not only does this mean we have a dedicated gallery approved and managed by the Artist themselves.
It's set up in a way so we don't have to scour the entire gallery for what was just added.

Your art is amazing and I look forward to every update. <3

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Your story is amazing and awesome. I hope everything turns out well. You make amazing things!

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Noooo! Where are my 100-200 pages of filler material?! I love those!

Still awesome works but those additional pages should be there. Yes, now reading will be easier but other part was also very important.

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Much appreciated The-Kite. Thank you for maintaining your work here despite everything, it really is outstanding! That you do so freely is laudable.

When I'm finally comfortable financially, I'll remember to support your patreon.

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Hooray for D&D table top gaming!

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Wish there was more smut.

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This comic is honestly underrated for how good it's sense of place and how lived in the world feels, Kite could legit do a non-porn/ecchi Pokemon fan comic and still make a ton of bank.

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Really loving the sudden D&D scene already! Can mega-evolved Gardevoir tank that hit though? May be down to who scores the crit...!

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Too little sex scenes

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This comic has gone off the rails in THE BEST WAY POSSIBLE!!!!

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Hah page 171 Elden ring reference

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#165 Elsa's back!

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As I do every year, I will take a month long summer break starting from June 30 to August. There will still be random content update during that month (I plan to use the time to get some design work done, notably Sinean designs and have some fun) and get so rest and recover in the meantime! HMGBAPS, Unsheltered, and Legends Arceus: Strange Shores updates will stop until the end of the break!

As I didn't want to stop HMGBAPS on another cliffanger, the last two pre-break pages will be replaced by a 2 pages Wild Times mini arc around the "current in Galar" team. I hesitated to upload them in this one gallery, but it would be confusing on the long term.

You can find them on my HF and Twitter starting today.

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Wow, the pre-rewrite stuff was written better and was sexier. It also had a better art style. Very beautiful and fit the theme. I loved how you frequently used your knowledge of pokemon in the story. Now it looks closer to post-modernist stuff and the story doesn't feel grounded as a pokemon story anymore. It just uses the characters without incorperating anything beyond that.

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I'm not sure you know what "post-modernism" is, both as a current and as a philosophy, but "it looked better before" is something I did consider, and them's the brakes of switching to a less rendered style I still haven't fully come up with. :p

As for the story, the only different thing I'm doing at the current moment, is (temporarily) switching the "viewpoint" from worldbuilding to characters*.

The sex thing is coming back.

Last edited on 23 September 2022, 09:14.

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Will we see Lou's father's story? How he got that gothitelle?

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So, as I did say earlier, I am a bit unsatisfied about the recent style evolution because it's "missing something" that it had before, so I'm going to use Ch3 to work out a final style I can be satisfied with, and that looks good without taking me a week of 3D modeling. :P

Please participate in the survey if you're interested!
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@idiothead123 We'll see a summary of it, at least; however, how he got the gothitelle is pretty simple, she's his starter, so there's not much mystery about that specific point.

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What is the white Pokemon to the left of the Mismagius on page 22?

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I'm going to take a week or two to practice a new style and assess my current options. Updates may resume before, it'll depend on my progress!

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Page 68 was very heartwarming.

I think a lesbian sex scene between Elsa and Laure would be amazing, both smut wise and plot wise. And sex scenes with Mrs. Liliscione or Anabelle would also be great. I know if someone tries to trick Anabelle into having sex they'll be eaten by Girantina, but someone could tell her how beautiful she is and not be deceptive.

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new reader here. i went in not knowing what to expect at all and i'm just blown away by the story you created. you can feel the sheer effort that went into everything from the art to the world-building that translates the pokemon setting into a pornified version that actually makes sense internally. reading about your health upset was disconcerting, i hope you're on the way to full recovery.

one point i wanted to raise is that maybe it'd be better if the shorts were integrated into this gallery. they include not only material that deepens understanding of the main story, but also plot points that directly appear in the main story (such as who clem is).

if you don't mind, i'll link the free archive you maintain here for other new readers:

https://ouo.io/UHMqVq(ongoing)?dl=0&subfolder_nav_tracking=1

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@Wolvien: I'm not yet out of the woodwork, but I'm way better than I used to be when my health took a nosedive. Thanks for the well wish! :)

That's actually a good point; I wasn't sure whether to upload the Shorts here or in a separate gallery...

I'll wait a day (since I uploaded today) or so and think about it; shorts in the same gallery could be confusing for readers. :)

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Finally a NSFW Pokémon western artist that writes good plot stories and has good art!

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@The-Kite just a suggestion that if you do add the shorts in, then may i suggest at least for new readers finding your story for the first time on here that you add the more plot relevant ones in after the chapters they follow on from while just putting the random ones at the end.

also any plans to continue the poison lou story just curious.

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@MegaZeroGT: Thanks a lot for your kind words!

@boblan5000: Just did so, thanks for the suggestion!
Poison Lou will be continued, but I think I'll wait for HMGBAPS main itself to be done, as I do have several "spinoffs" in mind!

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Laure: "...why do I hear boss music?"

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I feel like I'm going blind or crazy, but wasn't there a section that showed Eerie wanting to learn how to mega-evolve by herself, and then going off to a porn studio on her own and giving Lou and ultimatum to sign her off to the studio for good and stuff? I can't seem to find it here anymore. @_@

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@neoshingundam CAN'T AGREE, it got me hooked for the bdsm-stuff, and made me leave, bec on the later chapters, theres not even a shred of it left!:/

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@weapon03 retconned due to poor pacing as admitted by Thekite themselves.

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I really like the story, but when I first read it on here, I was able to follow along for the first half, but the second half of uploads felt like they were disjointed and what not. I would be reading one story, then the very next arc/chapter would feature different characters referencing events that I never read about before.

If I remember right, there was one chapter where Lou encounters a bunch of Hex Maniacs at a graveyard. I think this was the chapter where I learned that the different trainer types in games are used as an actual...thing. Like, if (in this world) if you want to be a Pokemon user, you have to register for a license type and you have to undergo a strict regimen so that you look, think, feel, act, and train like all the other trainers that have that license type. I think the Ace trainer license mostly just had the requirement of having tons of cash. I don't remember what Lou's trainer type is called, but it's the reason why she has the same clothing and hairstyle as her mom since they registered for the same trainer license. She could do anything or go anywhere with her license, but she had to look fashionable as FUCK while doing so.

Anyway, like I said, the chapter/arc ended with her talking to some Hex Maniacs in a graveyard. But in the next arc, the Maniacs are nowhere to be seen and I think Lou was just sitting in a cafe or something talking to someone completely different. I don't know, maybe I'm just misremembering these things. At least to me, it didn't feel like a scene transition because I don't remember Lou ever bringing up the conversation/interaction she had with the Hex Maniacs again. Oh, was there something going on with Lou's mom and that one thicc Hex Maniac? I remember reading a particular scene where the big-titty-goth-GF...er, Hex Maniac was talking about making the world a better place, but then she gets into a relationship with the main character's mom and they acted like they knew each other for a while. Maybe this was because some chapters weren't posted, but there were many scenes like that in this comic and they were all confusing.

The later chapters would also have footnotes referencing stuff that I hadn't read before so I was extra lost and just forced myself through in hopes that I could pick up what's going on using context clues. This was a while ago, so I'm assuming I was reading from another gallery that just uploaded everything raw.

Or not, I don't know. In any case, the main questions I would like to ask is if this is the gallery I should read. Should I read the story here? Or elsewhere? It looks like the first 2 chapters are from one continuity and the next ones are from another continuity. Where can I read the early chapters of the new continuity. Should I even bother reading the old continuity stuff since I'll just be left with a cliffhanger before the reboot?

As for my thoughts, while I like the story, it feels like the title is a bit misleading. The Gardevoir being a porn star is brought up a lot in the early chapters (of what I guess is the old timeline), but after a while, the pornstar aspect of the story seems to be brought up less and less. It's almost like it's a background aspect. And while it's fine to swap from being a sex-heavy comic to a more story-focused comic with sex sprinkled in (I honestly don't mind that. Plus a lot of comics that want to tell a bigger story tend to go that route anyway), if the title is about a Pokemon becoming a porn star, I would expect the story to be about the journey of Eerie in becoming a porn star. The story is called How My Gardevoir Became a Porn Star: but at the beginning of the story, she's already a porn star. Yes, the story has flashbacks so you can see the steps leading up to how she became a porn star, but the story has been continuing on past her successful entry into porn stardom. At this point, unless she goes from being a porn star, to no longer a porn star, back to being an even better porn star (or even just being as popular as she was before), the title of the story doesn't make sense.

Unless...is chapter 2 supposed to be the new continuity's chapter 1?

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Contrast on the latest page (186) is way too overblown, posted a version with a lighting more in line with pages coming before it on HF and Twitter, and will replace 186 when I upload 187 next Friday as not to do a bump post

Still finding my footing with this style, but I hope to work out a good in middle-ground between shading and line.

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Tbh, the more I read this, the more I genuinely believe it is Eerie, not Lou who should be apologizing. On top of that, she's done little to make amends, properly apologize or fix the situation, other than offer some wild Pokemon she met at the Park. She isn't loyal nor is she loving.

From what's we've seen, especially in scenes where she was smiling with other actresses on set while Lou was standing by miserable, Eerie is just as bad as Aya, except Aya is honest about being a playgirl. She's just a s much of a Playgirl, but refuses to admit it.

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Hey Kite, I got a two question.

1. How long till you put in the Paldea region in? Or is it way too new to add?

2. I never saw you drew Dynamax in the story (or general I guess). Didn't like it or drawing Giantess would be hard to scale?

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@Stevester: I thought about it as I (initially) had adapted HMGBAPS CH2 to include Galar in it (and then the entire rewrite made it easier to take it into account) but I decided against it this time, as it would require a another narrative shift, and while I'd love for Lou to get a Tinkaton, the gymnastic to get there would almost require another rewrite... So my plan for Scarlet/Violet as of now is that it'll come in its own story

2. Actually I just haven't had the opportunity yet; I had drawn some Alpha-sized (before PLA) pokémon that were supposed to appears in the og chapter 2 but then got retconned; both Dynamax and Alpha size will appear eventually

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the art for the new pages is just phenomenal

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Bravo, Kite. What you've made here is truly phenomenal. I was looking through your work coming off of your Fallout content expecting more smut, and I find a drama that manages to capture the core theme of the importance of the bond between human and Pokemon better than any of the main-series games do. Your artwork is exceptional and every style you've presented works brilliantly in its own ways. I eagerly await further updates.

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