(RAW) http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/992793/72dd4026ed/
Horny for cute tomboy's?

As usual, thanks for the Muramuramura works!!!
Such a shame that this series ends with NTR, but oh well what can you do.

Last edited on 21 January 2023, 20:58.

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Makoto, my beloved.

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Rough grammar

every page: some missing commas

p.2 picking up fight > picking fights
p.2 if she wasn't wearing a skirt, I wouldn't be able to tell she's a girl > this entire page is in the past recalling past events. "I wouldn't have been able to"
p.2 quickly beaten up > beat up
p.3 lookin > lookin'
p.4 changin > changin'
p.4 starin > starin'
p.8 laying in of > inside of or just cut "of"
p.8 at the roof top > on the rooftop
p.9 talkin > talkin'
p.10 goin > goin'
p.13 embarrasing > embarrassing
p.13 your pussy is making so much mess > such a mess
p.17 why bother with such thing > things or such a thing (either way it sounds awkward anyway. better would be "Who cares about that crap?!")

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