Hey guys, this is an original rewrite I made from the December(plus other month) omake from Nt00's work.
i notice that many people are into ntr too much that they go and pressure the author, and that not good
so i made a slight more hidden ntr version to quench your thirst
all the cradit to nt00 for his beautiful artwork

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people seems to forget the purpose of this story, author have mina senpai waiting in line

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I did not like the author's idea but I still hate people try to pressure him to make what they want. It will lose the "original" meaning of the plot in his story. I'm still appreciate the author's original work no matter what kind of plot he's trying to write.

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Pretty bold to put (English) in the title then upload this rewrite

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at least learn English before trying a rewrite Jesus Christ

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Rather, I think this is a valid story.
The writer makes a hole in the story's development and calms it down with a fucking asshole few words.
It doesn't matter if it's NTR or Pure love anymore. It's going on unconvincing. LOL

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