the feeling when this kendo girl finally don her kendo costume only to switch to maid costume for sexy part
god damn it

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Page 1.

Your TL: Even the male club members can’t land a single hit, the overwhelming swordsmanship!!
RAW text: 男子部員相手にも一本も取らせない，圧倒的な剣才の待ち主！
Author’s intent: Got the first bit right about how the male club members can’t score a point on her, but the second part is a bit mangled, it’s something more like, “The Kendo Club’s Captain, Kanzaki-san, she’s someone who possess overwhelming talent with a sword, to the point that even the male members in the club can’t score a point on her!”. The way you’ve put it is kinda lacking.

Your TL: N/A
RAW text: 大丈夫か？
Author’s intent: “Are you okay?”, whenever I see non-bubbled text not translated it just makes me think it’s MTL’d because OCR can’t read these things.

Your TL: N/A
RAW text: いってぇ
Author’s intent: “Ow.”

Page 2.

Your TL: …I have to reveal kanzaki’s weakness somehow…!
RAW text :どうにかして神崎さんの鼻を明かしたい．．．！
Author’s intent: (shitty translation on my part)“I want to get the better of Kanzaki somehow…!”, 鼻を明かす means to get the better of someone, not reveal their weakness. Also he specially says したい which means to want.

Your TL: N/A
RAW text: ちくしょ
Author’s intent: Son of a bitch, motherfucker, god fucking damnit, etc etc.

Your TL: Then came the cultural festival!
RAW text: そんな折 迎えた 文化祭！
Author’s intent: “I was given such an opportunity with the cultural festival!”, completely missed the first bit of the opportunity to get one up on kanzaki.

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Your TL: The clothes I was wearing at the cultural festival.
RAW text: さっきまで文化祭で着てた服で．．．って
Author’s intent: “You really came here in the clothes you were wearing during the Cultural Festival…-”, missed pretty much the whole point of the sentence, only mentioning that she says “clothes worn during cultural festival”.

Your TL: It’s too erotic Ouka-chan.
RAW text: いやえろすぎ桜花ちゃん
Author’s intent: “You’re so naughty/too hot/so lewd/too lewd”, you missed the fact that he was talking about her specifically.

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Your TL: Oh Oh God
RAW text: ああ お 奥ー
Author’s intent: “Aah! Oh- So deep-”, you missed the deep part and just said OOOOOOOOH

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Your TL: Me…me too…
RAW text: わ．．．わたしもまた．．．
Author’s intent: “M-Me too, I’m cumming again-”, missed the again part.

I figure you just forgot to typeset the box with the missing text, it happens, I’ve done it too, no big deal.

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How does a rough translation have over 4 stars? I will forever ask what the fuck is wrong with you guys. You guys that like and rate MTL uploads this high, you guys do know you can MTL whatever you like yourselves. Since standards aren't anything you guys have. This will save everyone trouble. Download raws from here, MTL said raws, fap, and move on with your day. No need to share with people. Shouldn't take more than 10 or 20min to do with the right program.

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quick TL and uncensored even explain slang ,The power of H

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