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能带男主开淫趴已经算不错的了

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前輩們也不是什麼壞到骨子人，真要說就男主個性太懦了
態度強硬一點也許還有點機會 算了至少還有女菩薩辣妹免費口交 知足知足(?

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ntr味被黑皮和黄毛搞太淡了，感觉开始就像是换妻本作者可能觉得走向不太对结尾又加一点ntr？总之黄毛和男主都没啥存在感，感觉更像是黑皮痴女对女主的调教秀，莫名觉得像蚊香社的av剧情

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开银趴叫上男主，这么好的前辈，又算是什么NTR了！

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这就是开趴！

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你们怎么说的这么有道理

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都給你幹穴了到底有什麼意見
操

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又不是可以干黑发，如果黑发是由男主先干就证明学长是真的好人
现在这样完全没意思

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Can anyone post a summary please? Seems like they both end up dating the chads at the end, but they still seemed to enjoy doing it with MC, so why did they choose the senpai?

Also i wish there was only one chad that stole them away, 3P is the best

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the author seems forcing it to make the MC cuck and an outsider in that last part to make it NTR.
well, sex scene and art was great so its great for one time read fap.

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就黑发这种婊子干了血赚不干也无所谓，和男主第一次就要戴套才做，前辈随随便便就操上了，就算男主和她成情侣了，大概率也是ntr结尾

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一开始的前辈带男主开趴，就算后面和辣妹成为男女关系不都默许辣妹给男主口，多好！

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I'm not sure what to think about this yet. A summary would be nice for full context.

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I google translated the last page. Blondie was like “hey don’t be sad, I’ll give you a blowjob later “, and mc at the end say “yes “. I don’t know, I think it would have been better if he didn’t say anything at the end. Like he learned a lesson about swinging, and realize how unhealthy the blondie was. Not only ruining the relationship he had with the black hair girl, but her not being able to grasp basic empathy . But to note. The blondie is a just a slut that sleeps around, so I doubt she’s in a relationship lol, but the mc crush is now dating the other guy.

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the art is decent but the story doesn't make sense. 5/10

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男主ㄐㄐ夠大，明明幹下去就能保一惹

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