染发黑辣妹!!!变。变。变???我的头好痛。。。

Base +6, qwe7749 +5

Her whole behaviour and dress is a giant red flag. The husband must be pretty dense if he thought she was wife material.

Base +7, Quflow +7, Clayton Smith +6, Gandu89 +11, CyborgSamurai +6, nanaya666 +6, S0B +14, moximoore +15, 58569 +6, biscardone -7, Brego1 -6

This is more cheating then ntr to be honest.

Base +8, hayateftw1 +6, Vanguard_NG +6, CharlieHoang97 +6, jubjubman8 +7, moximoore +15, 58569 +6, K81f +5, Brego1 +6

Alright, some of this is jarring. Not redrawing and trying to hide your poor cleaning job with absolutely massive black strokes is not only lazy, it's also ugly as hell (esp since some of your other releases seem fine). If you're gonna beg people to pay you, then at least try to act like you give a shit. Also, your font is weird. Why does it have a bizarre drop shadow? Why is the anti-aliasing not set to "Smooth"?

Also, idk why you keep exporting your black and white pages in RGB instead of grayscale. Not sure why there's color in there. See guide here: /img/e-hentai/attachments/902314557077336064/997654450149789757/optimize_image.jpg

Here's guides:

General resources: https://elii.cc/hp3a8t
Typesetting: https://oko.sh/d5rZLC6q
Redrawing: https://oko.sh/9ddPElTHmB

(Oh, and you misspelled "commissions".)

Base +18, Zenturial -7, cathodex2 -6, cybeast93 +20, yutshu +6, malyg -6, funk_u_up +13, Kyuume +3, jubjubman8 -7, pervy_owl -6, 58569 +6, wootwoot123 +6, darkbringmaster -7

there will be a second version out later with full redrawing, just gotta w8

Base +1, lady_Konata +8, Tzeowk +9, ElTurk +6, jubjubman8 +7, 58569 +6, wootwoot123 +6

godtier translation

Base +6, PsychicDoom -6

Looks like Tyrone flipped the switch back on to this cheating 304. Wouldn't be surprised if he knocked her up with his kid.

Base +12, wootwoot123 +6

Of course the black guy doesn't have a fucking job

Base +6, CyborgSamurai +6, HellVOps +7, Solomus +7, Arsinis +6, Heavy J +6, Yukipo~ +6, S0B +14, Zaiup +6, wootwoot123 +6, TechnoTeddy +6, Planetary +7

And obviously guy can have sex for whole day and night..... I know it's hentai and everything goes, but come on...

Base +7, TechnoTeddy +6

That censorship ruined everything...

Edit: I know I'm just a free lurker but for goddamn sake, this is a porn and censorship still fricking hit it for some f**king reason! It's not like this doujin got into SFW category with that obvious scene! Come on, dude. Why the censorship?

Base +10