Artist Links

http://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ402687.html
http://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_235990
https://orca03ocean.fanbox.cc/
https://ouo.io/4DDHJ8
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/31938023
https://skeb.jp/@oRCa03ocean

Raw
http://dl.hentaiknight.work/?l=e-hentai/g/2270846/e293480a1d/

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I'm very much a beginner at this whole translating/typesetting thing but I feel like I learned a lot doing this doujin. I'm sure there's still much room for improvement so any feedback would be appreciated a lot!

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Edit: Fixed typos on Pg.5 tounge -> tongue
Pg.18 rigt -> right
Pg.21 completly -> completely

No idea how I missed these... Hopefully I've gotten all of them now though!

You should go over your script one last time, cause I took a quick look and I spotted a misspelled word in p5. I'm really sleepy rn so I couldn't check the whole thing.

Base +6, FilthyLolicon +6, ハーレム +7

You did a better job than the other translation, so you got that going.

Base +17, Blackiris39 +7, ハーレム +7, Porokichin66 +9, RefinedFapper +6