V3 Black and White balanced and leveled too
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Raw:
http://dl.hentaiknight.work/?l=e-hentai/g/1142418/293c2bb8a2/

Here are some corrections you may want to consider using in case you intend to update this gallery.

P02
"Sakuragaoka Girls' High School", not "Female".
"So close to me", not "so near of me".

P03
"For giving me a lift", not "for give me a lift".

P04
"There's... another place I have to go", not "There was... another place that I had to go" (Past tense shouldn't be used in this case).
"You're... not?", not "You... don't?" (He's responding to her statement).

P07
"Than I thought", not "that I thought".

P09
"Tsugumi's most important place", not "Tsugumi most important place".

P11
"I can't hold back any more", not "I can't hold it anymore".

P18
"I'm deflowering her", not "I deflower her".

P19
"How does it feel", not "How does it feels".

You also don't need to capitalize every instance of the word "you".

And if you're looking for alternative fonts, you can try checking this thread out: https://elii.cc/hp3a8t . You'll find lots of suggestions there.

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Base +4

Rough grammar
p2 there was inside my heart a really dark desire -> a really dark desire deep inside my heart
p3 im -> I'm
p4 not be -> not to be
tsugimi -> tsumugi
p5 tsugimi -> tsumugi
p9 tsugumi -> tsumugi
p10 tsugimi -> tsumugi
p11 tsugimi -> tsumugi
ready!!s -> ready
p12 tsugumi -> tsumugi
p13 tsugumi -> tsumugi
p18 im -> I'm
p20 still can -> can still
tsugumi -> tsumugi
its moving -> it's moving

Last edited on 05 August 2022, 05:20.

Base +42, Glovelove. +19, bkku +7, Tophat_Joe +6, sonictmp -7, czerkill +10, Ripsmash +6, musoukaXIV +10, g0su +14, Daruna +10

Her name is Tsumugi lol.

Base +16, Winter is Cumming +6, bkku +7, as102 +12, Ripsmash +6, plusarkos +6, g0su +14

Why bother updating when you don't fix terrible editing and piss poor translation?

Base +12, Daruna +10, Orazio +6, Ripsmash +6, Amauri14 +6, g0su +14, MC Arisato +6