RAW: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2186781/daee634118/

Base +13

iwashita's stories are usually pretty dark afaik
i remember one where a guy stole a girl's body and made her (in the guy's body) mindless and pleasure obsessed
there's also one where a brother got forced to swap with his little sister, not sure what happened after that though because its still untranslated

Base +5, nopanrs +8

@Genderbender4days

You were okay until the last line of your comment. If you personally find this story distasteful, so be it. Just move on to something else.

But for you to say "shame on the person who made this"? No, that's not okay.

And prefacing it with "As a trans person, I…" doesn't make it okay, either. You don't have that authority or privilege, regardless of what you've been led to believe over the last few years.

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rough grammar

p.3 that the little girl at that > from back then
p.3 has grew up > had grown up
p.5 beautifully left and right pink crevice > nonsensical
p.6 we have a regular daily physical check-ups > cut "a" or make it singular
p.7 doesn't it seems > seem
p.8 you guys // were raised as a candidate > as candidates
p.8 will belongs > belong
p.9 it can delivers > deliver
p.9 consiousness
p.16 voices slowly changing to man > voice is singular here
p.17 same mistake here. also "thin voice" makes no sense.
p.20 testicles has been formed > have been
p.25 it's an indescribable pleasant feelings > indescribably pleasant feeling

Base +17

interesting

Base +5