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[Odenden (Etori Yuuya)] First Experience (WIP) (ENGLISH)

はじめてのたいけん (Pixiv Fanbox)

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neru21   PM
Posted:2022-07-30 17:29
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:1.50 MB
Length:4 pages
Favorited:299 times
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Average: 2.66

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Posted on 30 July 2022, 17:29 by:   neru21     PM
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Author > etori.fanbox.cc
i'm a newbie starting to TL doujins (specially femboy/trap/sissy) if you want to help or team up send me a message and we can chat on discord
Posted on 30 July 2022, 17:41 by:   Waitugreat     PM
Score +150
Don't forget to add at least the yaoi tag after uploading such kind of work. kthx

(but nice to see an translator anyway, so welcome)

B-But there are several speech bubbles untranslated. Same with text outside of bubbles. Page 4 is even completely untranslated. Just saying!

raw: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2126064/8895682577/
Posted on 30 July 2022, 18:29 by:   cutegyaru     PM
Score +89
Half this shit is untranslated. I'm not even sure it can be tagged as "English."

rough tl

All the below dialogue is untranslated.

p.1 ここで [...]
p.1 それに [...]
p.1 これが [...]
p.2 うわぁ・・・なにこれ・・・
p.2 そう・・・なんだ・・・
p.3 こ・・・こんな [...]
p.3 エッチって [...]
p.4 ズポズポ [...]
p.4 おちんちん [...]
p.4 こっちの方が [...]
Posted on 30 July 2022, 21:36 by:   RabidTanker     PM
Score +270
You'll get an better reception if you've waited until you finished translating stuff before posting it on here.
Posted on 01 August 2022, 18:58 by:   Deity Link     PM
Score +1
Great power-bottom stuff

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