Once again, great art is dragged down by the most boring, cookie-cutter setup. Business as usual.

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MH conversation in brain:

"I need to have sex with BIG COCK!!"

...........

"Um, for our husbands sake...?"

"Oh, right! Yeah! For... That guy..."

XD

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lol thanks for the upload rofl, but the "common sense" here would be she beat the shit out of him, and just tell her husband to do something else to make money hahahah but this is hentai fall you crazy wife fall .

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So it's not tagged shotacon because he's dressend in suit, got it.

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I'll never understand people wanting a unique story. Erotica isn't like normal media.

Generally, the erotica reader wants to know what's going to happen before they read it. There's specific itches they're trying to scratch. That's why genres in porn are for more specific than normal media (mind break, blackmail, milf, impregnation vs adventure, action, mystery, etc).

The thing that should be a mystery is the execution, and of course the artwork.

It's not like there are lots of original stories anyway. We have cutouts for normal media like the hero's journey. Of course erotica would have similar tropes.

As for the story itself: it could be better. It's not bad, but nothing special. I do think execution is incredibly important and there's a huge issue with authors having amazing drawing skills but not understanding the subtle parts of what makes something hot.

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