あ~なだは、い ま どこでなに~をしていま す か

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wow what the hell is that censorship?

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@ElliE8:

The same. I feel like all NTR stories are the same. A boyfriend (or husband) who is naive, a wife who is naive and illogical. I feel like all the writers think all women are brainless cunts and husbands are all idiots... I know in 26 pages it's hard to build a real story but still ... it's always the same thing.

1) We can remove the cosplay part since it has no interest afterwards.
2) The boyfriend lets her go alone when he should accompany her and see with her (he has the right to have a say if it's for pictures).
3) The pitch of the photoshoot in a love hotel, just after the first meeting smells like a trap (so much so that in Japan, it's not done anymore).
4) The woman is guided, without resistance (we even wonder if she has a boyfriend??)
5) She takes a shower at the hotel when she could very well have gone home right away and felt remorse (she still lives alone apparently).

No, we don't feel the love between the 2 protagonists. Arakure has accustomed us to better, much better.

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烂透了，毫无意义的剧情，NTR之耻

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