I wanted to do this one for a while. Now I can say I have.

Obnoxiously large text aside, let me know if I missed any text balloons. I'll fix it up right away.

English: You are here.
RAW: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1200280/2215e63191/
Korean: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1201264/f76ed63aa2/
Chinese: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1216907/a528e16bc0/
Portugese: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1343463/73c5ff9157/
Spanish: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1850160/541c015124/
Italian: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1944574/380da1be71/

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Editing advice: don't put spoken dialogue vertically. It can be reeeeally hard to read. It's fine for SFX, though.

Ex: Page 15: The "thumps" are fine, but "then..." should be horizontal, even if it cuts across the bubble. Sometimes you'll have to put them on two different lines to make it fit, like:

Ha-
ah!

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I'll keep that in mind for next time!

Thank you for the feedback!

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Thank you..............................................

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