Fixed errors. If you see any more. let me know.

Oh, wow, didn't expect to see a translation any time soon. Really appreciate it!

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Thanks for the translation man! love when the author build the worldlike this, i hope you continue the other two chapters!!

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114 onlythe
126 was be
129 exctreted
134 for of. also duplicate passage
138 armor of heart
139 have to more
144 establish[ed]
153, 155 right passage overflows
155 remove "over"

Last edited on 22 January 2022, 03:25.

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Page 84: I think you want a "to" before the "win".
Page 94: Could use another comma.
Page 100: "Recklessly".
Page 108: "Screamed", consistent tense.
Page 114: Missing space.
Page 139: Missing the word "make".
Page 144: "Established", consistent tense.
Page 148: "Changed" is not the end of the sentence and using "Giselle's" is bad grammar too.
Page 153, 155: The text spills out past the end of the image.

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Fuck yes this has a translation

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134 "was only thing"

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Hoh boy. You know you're in for a ride when you see "pinkjoe".

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Fucking finally....

I hope the second and third will also be translated..

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