Hello to all of you!

This time it's the story of Elisabeth and her son Kevin, who are going to be dragged into a spiral of transformation during a weekend where a colleague of Elisabeth invites her to a weekend with her friends on his private island.

I hope you enjoy this story!
Happy reading and Happy Holidays!

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Captions : https://ouo.io/TR09Yk

I say this pretty much every time but if you have a story like this, at least give both of them a different title, because the characters from part 1 are not here.

But also another problem still comes in, this feels way too rushed, the period to explain the story is too short, the swap happens too quick and without explanation how it happened or where it came from or what caused it, and then the ending is like "And all their problems magically resolved after being insurmountable before" it's the same problems every comic.

And the grammar error also still happen, I believe this time even more than last time.

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@Amel1995
For the aspect "Rushed story", I think I'll try to make huge stories with many chapters like before or try to reduce the number of characters. For exemple, for the comics about what happened one year after the Mad Swapper, I'll make 2 parts for have some time to develop all characters.

And for the grammar error, maybe I need to review my translation with someone where English is his (or her) native language. Of course, French grammar rules aren't the same as English rules so, yeah, sometimes some sentences have a "Frenchy" grammar instead of pure English grammar.

But if I do that, the English version will be of course delayed.

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Never tired of a story where the son is a shemale

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Hi, the subject of the story was very beautiful, but if it is possible to change the character, please change the person completely to another person, not to change the body and not to change its face.

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@Sieght I think the best course of action is not rush the ending, this has been the problem that presisted the most so far, let it go to part 2 or extend the story, a story means nothing if the ending is just gonna be bad and rushed, Game of Thrones tought us that.

As for the grammar problem, if you're selling these comics on Patreon, honestly it's worth paying someone to go over grammar, if the reader is gonna spend half the time trying to figure out if for example someone calling a guy a "She" is part of the story or a grammar error that's gonna take the reader out of the story.

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I always find your comics interesting but I agree with the other comments that very often the weakest part are the rushed endings. Having fewer characters for shorter comics might help a bit with that. The grammar errors on the other hand I don't really care, personally.

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