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[Shoot The Moon (Fuetakishi)] Ana Zuma 3 Motoyan Osanazuma ga Ochita Wake II [Digital]

[シュート・ザ・ムーン (フエタキシ)] 穴妻3 元ヤン幼妻が堕ちたワケI II [DL版]

Doujinshi
Posted:2021-12-24 05:45
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:Japanese  
File Size:358.3 MB
Length:49 pages
Favorited:1036 times
Rating:
196
Average: 4.73

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Posted on 24 December 2021, 05:45 by:   mangakam     PM
Uploader Comment
http://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_219288/

Vol 01 : http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1984270/9d9d63d65f/
Posted on 24 December 2021, 05:54 by:   zero398     PM
Score +185
跟剛出道的精靈作品比起來 作者真的是越畫越退步 混水摸魚的該覺越來越重了
Posted on 24 December 2021, 06:32 by:   pekcun     PM
Score +83
The borders look strange.
Posted on 24 December 2021, 06:57 by:   asurast     PM
Score +69
The art became much worse...how? Did fuetakishi do QC of his own work?
what a letdown...
Posted on 24 December 2021, 07:32 by:   CCTV47     PM
Score -3
这作者画的越来越不行了
Posted on 24 December 2021, 08:02 by:   SoSadSo     PM
Score -2
駝背是真的辣眼睛
Posted on 24 December 2021, 09:32 by:   Misesty     PM
Score +28
Hell yeah Shoko MILF NTR.But holy shit Fueta rushed the fuck out of the doujin that it still has the page borders.
Posted on 24 December 2021, 10:02 by:   zqs12345678     PM
Score +4
退步了,感觉色彩好浅
Posted on 24 December 2021, 10:06 by:   BamBlackStar     PM
Score +19
I hope people complain about this enough to at least make him fix this unfished work :/
Posted on 24 December 2021, 11:41 by:   EliSonoda     PM
Score +12
雖然弱智姐妹那個系列劇情真的很弱智,但是真的色。
Posted on 24 December 2021, 12:19 by:   小鹏来冲了     PM
Score +4
越画越拉胯
Posted on 24 December 2021, 12:50 by:   zbc     PM
Score +6
确实冬虫夏草8部应该算是巅峰了,这也不能说不好吧,但是珠玉在前实在让人唏嘘
Posted on 24 December 2021, 14:48 by:   reignengine     PM
Score +51
His old works were a whole lot better, the art is shit and to be honest all he does is Ntr and it just sucks story wise.
Posted on 24 December 2021, 15:28 by:   EX0188     PM
Score -3
越畫越拉胯
Posted on 24 December 2021, 15:45 by:   Orion9137     PM
Score +32
Arts worse from the first, a fuetakishi classic. And what's up with the chopped off heads and party hat look bits, did he not finish in time but still release this for $$$ regardless? Yikes mate.
Posted on 24 December 2021, 17:08 by:   Sakuman10     PM
Score +15
This was absolutely awful.
I think is even worse than his last doujin from the sister series. In fact, I think that work is a masterpiece compared to this.
Let's recap:
- Clearly unfinished work, which is unacceptable because he was posting previews in his Twitter way ahead of time.
- A lot of shots are literally a copy paste from previous works.
- The cuck, aka the Husband, is completely invisible so far in the series, so the NTR is super meh.
- Extremely rushed second half. Pages 42-44 were a joke because after that it was over. Seriously, what the fuck was that last sex scene?
And the worse thing is that this garbage is selling well. I'm sorry, but it shouldn't. This shouldn't have better sales than others works that are clearly better and have artist that they put much more effort. We shouldn't reward this trash.
Hopefully he will re-release this in the near future (I can't wait for this shit to become a trend like games with dlc day one or early access games like Fallout 76 or Cyberpunk) and it also will be a free download to all the owners (lol, yeah, right).
Embarrasing stuff from Fuetakishi.
Oh and btw and most important, Merry Christmas to everyone.
For another year.
Posted on 24 December 2021, 22:30 by:   medkittestspeed     PM
Score +5
can we all agree its always the same with this author? the little nigga put all his work top the cover lol
Posted on 24 December 2021, 23:54 by:   Z4turn     PM
Score +14
As much as I like Fuetakishi artstyle, this is just greed at it's worse, selling a clearly unfinished work is just an insult to the fans, is that amount of money really worth damaging your image like that?
Posted on 25 December 2021, 03:30 by:   momo0923zmy     PM
Score +6
我不知道怎么定义越画越拉胯这件事··我也不知道该不该评价剧情有脑没脑
但至少这个本子看起来跟没完成一样让我很难受
Posted on 25 December 2021, 04:38 by:   Glory H     PM
Score +6
和商店街穴妻1、2集比一比就知道他這集的人體比例和之前的作品比很明顯的不協調,陰影細節上也是。

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