Raw: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1418530/dae2defdb1/
DLsite: http://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ244190

Mainly made for personal enjoyment, so quality of TL, typesetting, and redrawing are the work of an amateur. That said, please enjoy and look out for other releases from myself.

Also available from the same series:
English TR: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2052108/59b06236b5/

Other languages of this gallery:
Chinese TR: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1402197/052f2f08ca/
Korean TR: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1438273/d2f3ecdd85/ or http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1560186/9799870897/

Base +47, MelmothTheWanderer +34, politas -7, john34404 +8, InfiniteCanvas +6, Mckafie +1

This is actually impressive work for your first project. I wish people cared as much as you do and did their homework beforehand. I'm sure you'll keep improving.

That said, please watch out for punctuation. I know JP versions rarely punctuate minus the odd ellipses or !?, but periods and commas aren't optional in English, even for doujins.

Some extra resources to help you in your journey: https://viid.me/9MeV5

Base +13, politas -7, john34404 +8, InfiniteCanvas +6, Egakor +8, SenpaiNM7 +6, VAC -6, Scumbini +39, dfgghgf +6, Beyond Imagination +6, Jamesbryans +9, Mckafie +1, neo_skyline +19, and 1 more...

"...so quality of TL, typesetting, and redrawing are the work of an amateur." Okay, there is room for improvement on selecting fonts and redrawings here and there, but it's still really good job for a first one. I've seen people asking for money or offering commissions putting less effort into their work. So, good job and please continue.

Base +19, Egakor +8, SenpaiNM7 +6, VAC +6, Jamesbryans +9, neo_skyline +19

I will watch your career with great interest.

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I've had my eye on this artist's stuff for a while now, but haven't gotten around to doing any yet. There are some typos/misspellings but I think I'd trust you to handle these. Just remember to strive to improve!

Feel free to get in touch with me if you want some feedback, you can find me on the Discord server found in any of my uploads. I'm sure cutegyaru would also be willing to do the same.

Keep it up!

Base +9, VAC -6, Scumbini +39, neo_skyline +19

Gallery updated. Thanks to everyone for your feedback.

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