This is an rework from http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2075204/4fb36d2db7/
I tried another font and implemented the corrections. Thx meow_pao

I'm not sure, if this version is better than the old one. So i uploaded it parallel.
What do you think?

My first translations:

Part 1: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2075204/4fb36d2db7/ --- Original: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1468916/2ed633622c/
Part 2: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2075982/596cf3abf1/ --- Original: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1468916/2ed633622c/
Part 3: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2076710/19e8e4d98f/ --- Original: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1757356/22b5c92217/
Part 4: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2077608/d4c60cf46d/ --- Original: -
Part 5: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2078514/78ea114ca4/ --- Original: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2052886/27dfe60497/

女孩子要保护好自己（迫真）

Base +6, LordBarn -7

I liked the font in the first version more.

Base +6, LordBarn -7

Non of the fonts is really suited to typeset a manga. Some free comicfonts are Anime Ace (not the pretiest or easisest to work with), Komika, Wurmics Bravo, Wurper Comics. You can download them for free from sites like dafont.com. You can also check blambot.com for their free fonts.

But before continue to translate I recommend you study a typesetting guide or two like one of these:

https://ouo.io/3kglX2
https://ouo.io/gxicYL
https://ouo.io/HQL8b0

Base +19, vPhone +2, velocity606 +6, LordBarn -7, Dememori +4

Art 6. Plot 7. Sexiness 6. Translation 4. All out of 10.

Base +8

There is something funny about Marisa claiming having tapes despite that being too advanced for Gensokyo

Base +6

I appreciate your spirit.
For me I don't even care about your translation
but some folks.. you know.

Base +6