Good to have this translated, but it is full of poor editing, lacks spellchecking and contains mistakes.

Base +8, coleccionista903 +6, cutegyaru +13, Tryndamere95 +15

Then,by all means translate this one. We can always use more translators/checker/editors...

Base +1, Woody Pack -6, cutegyaru -13, Ownerer -6, Tryndamere95 -15

Raw: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/s/76358a476b/1284881-59

Base +26, Tryndamere95 +15

Here are some grammar and spellcheck corrections you may want to use, in case you plan on updating this gallery:

P02
"We humbly thank you" not "We humbly than you".

P07
"I won't lose to demons", not "I won't lose to demon's".

P08
"Those big breasts", not "those big breast"

P12
"Why does it feel good", not "Why does it feels good".

P13
"Slutty", not "sluty".
"How dare you", not "How dare yo".
"It's going to put a demon's baby", not "It's going put a demon's baby".

P15
"A monster put its cock inside", not "a monster put it's cock inside".

P16
"That's why its pounding got heavier", not "That's why it pounding got heavier".

P17
"It hurts when you fill my womb" or "It hurt when you filled my womb", not "It hurt when you fill my womb" (mismatched tense forms).

P19
"Surely", not "surly".

P20
"It's been a day" or "It's been days", not "It's been day".

Also, the gallery title should be "Saint's Conception", not "Saints Conseption"

Base +37, cutegyaru +13, Tryndamere95 +15

At least you meow_pao offered critique with substance to back it up, I'll use your suggestions to appease the grammar nazi hoard that live on the internet. But believe it or not, the first draft was waaaaay worse than this and I rushed the second edit.

The curse of doing everything solo...

Any other spelling errors you fukers fine in this hentai, let me know down below and I'll fix and re-edit them later. I aim to provide a service y'all can cum to appreciate 😘

Last edited on 28 November 2021, 06:01.

Base +1, LRaglan -6, Woody Pack -6, cutegyaru -13, Ownerer -6, Tryndamere95 -15

@CCCupid

I am gonna question how you were able to rush the the translation solo? better take it slow and not rushing it.

just gonna copy and paste my advice below.

List of things you need to learn to be better, I am no editor but just giving you some general advice

1. Use suitable font, wild words is usually acceptable.
2. Make sure to have someone to proofread your/someone translation , by hiring or some other way.
3. Make sure to use proper size and word alignment when placing the text in the dialogue bubble.
4. You can ask for someone advice in the forum on Cove of Scanlator.
5. If able, for courtesy sake, link the raw and official store page, for people who want to genuinely support the artist.

follow these and you re golden.

Base +4, cutegyaru +13, Tryndamere95 +15