Mainly made for personal enjoyment, so quality of TL, typesetting, and redrawing are the work of an amateur. That said, please enjoy and look out for other releases from myself.
This is actually impressive work for your first project. I wish people cared as much as you do and did their homework beforehand. I'm sure you'll keep improving.
That said, please watch out for punctuation. I know JP versions rarely punctuate minus the odd ellipses or !?, but periods and commas aren't optional in English, even for doujins.
Some extra resources to help you in your journey: https://ouo.io/A4O1up
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"...so quality of TL, typesetting, and redrawing are the work of an amateur." Okay, there is room for improvement on selecting fonts and redrawings here and there, but it's still really good job for a first one. I've seen people asking for money or offering commissions putting less effort into their work. So, good job and please continue.