Today I publish the sequel of The Mad Swapper.
Who will be the new victims of the scientist and what will be the consequences of this?

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The poor grammar still makes this hard to go through, I don't know how long you've been making these, but please get someone to proofread or translate for you.

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@Amel1995
I will try to be more conscientious by checking the grammar a little more, I am really sorry if it is so difficult to read...

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Hello and thank you for your good work. I apologize for the work of your story. There are several drawbacks. One of them is the incompleteness of the transformation of a woman into a man. Another character becomes more attractive, and next in this story, for example, it would be better if the mother took the place of a girl or a boy and abused the mother, or someone stole another body and acted like that without anyone understanding, like the story of nanotechnology and others. The more conversions in your story, the better

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Now that I finished the story.....

SPOILER WARNING

So there's no ending?

No resolution?

The Mad Swapper gets to escape

We don't even see the people on the other side who got the bodies? nothing?

What's worse the people who got swapped got a worse ending and the bad guys got to escape.

That's very dissapointing, I had high hopes for this series, and as I was reading and the story was coming closer and closer to the end I started to get worried, seeing as there's only 2 parts and this is the end, but I was correct in being worried, the whole build up of the villain and the characters for nothing is really dissapointing.

We don't get to see what happened to the guys from Part A, what happened to the little one, or the pregnant one.

What happened to the people who the doctors swapped on the other side.

And even the characters in this part, their endings were rushed and finished in under 5 pages, that's really really bad.

I hope there's a part 3 that's coming soon to wrap this up, if not this ending is really bad and dissapointing

Last edited on 30 October 2021, 18:08.

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@Amel1995
Don't worry, there will be a part 3 next year, we will follow the antagonists, spliced in two teams, one side with some antagonists that expects a redemption and the other team (with the Mad Swapper) that continues in an other country / state.

So don't worry =)

And if you really want a chapter, let's say, one year later to see how the characters live their new lives, maybe I'll make a new chapter with some parts dedicated to one (or more) characters ^^

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@Seight

Well you didn't exactly make it obvious that there's a part 3, you just put "END" at the end as if the story was ending, not "TO BE CONTINUED" even in the first part you had "END?" to signify that the story would go longer.
The story doesn't even have a cliffhanger or a note that says it will continue.
We just have a rushed ending with a quick summary of how the people who got swapped during this part ended up, we didn't even get a summary of what happened to the people who got swapped in the first part, so everyone assumed the story is over with a shitty ending.

Plus you understand why this comic has such low reviews, your comics usually have 3+ stars at least, but this one is barely holding at a 1 star level.

I hope you this can be learned from, as someone who was invested I'm very dissapointed

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@Amel1995
Yeah I understand, I'm really sorry... I thought it was good, I'll check to improve all of this for the future comics I'll make ^^
And really thank you, I'll try to improve !

(To be honest, I thought that if I wrote "To Be Continued", people will think the next story will be right after the Part B with the same characters however the "Part C" will be a story centered on the antagonists... Soooo I thought wrong...)

Last edited on 01 November 2021, 17:46.

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