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[ifpark.com (ifpark)] Kanojo wa Watashi o Marunomi Shitai [English] [La Sainte perv']

[ifpark.com (ifpark)] 彼女は私を丸呑みしたい [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2021-08-06 11:37
Parent:1977216
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:47.91 MB
Length:33 pages
Favorited:399 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.34

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Posted on 05 August 2021, 18:06 by:   synpyre     PM
Score +17
Well, this is new.
Posted on 05 August 2021, 19:12 by:   Eden of Shirock     PM
Score +42
Strange but cute!
Posted on 05 August 2021, 19:15 by:   Halftime     PM
Score +133
Imagine being so bad at bing a tentacle monster that you rape and swallow someone and somehow you end up getting pushed down and topped by them.
Posted on 05 August 2021, 22:49 by:   danielwain     PM
Score +34
None of these errors are present anymore, only a few minor ones, so feel free to retract the misc:"poor grammar" tag, anyone that voted on it.
Last edited on 07 August 2021, 01:36.
Posted on 06 August 2021, 00:43 by:   scrump80     PM
Score +26
I like that I can at least understand the flow of the story with this translation. I've seen others attempt these sorts of three-language translations and fail miserably, so I think what you did is passable. The grammatical mistakes danielwain pointed out are important to take note of, however.

Also really enjoying what's going on in this doujin, so I'm glad it got translated either way.
Posted on 06 August 2021, 08:48 by:   danielwain     PM
Score +51
I rather wouldn't have given it the misc:"poor grammar" tag, there are a lot of stories that are more deserving of that. As @scrump80 pointed out, you could follow the story just fine, in spite of most of these minor errors. Still, that's at least 10 errors over 33 pages, there are some points that might be up to discussion or wrong on my end, but it still more than satisfies the 10 errors per 40 pages, regrettably. Translate it into English is actually right, for example. Feel free to correct any other errors I overlooked or made with the correction myself.
Posted on 06 August 2021, 09:27 by:   Pokom     PM
Score +48
Raw Chinese Chinese2 Korean French >English <
Thanks for sharing this.
Posted on 06 August 2021, 11:39 by:   Tartiflax340     PM
Score +13
@danielwain Hello thank you a lot for your precious help. It should be OK now thanks to your help. You can found the new version here: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1977705/a8eec5a10f/
Posted on 06 August 2021, 14:05 by:   Hentairo1     PM
Score +11
Hmm. I'd rather have seen this with older characters, but the story is fantastic! Thanks for the translation.
Posted on 06 August 2021, 22:17 by:   P-dog     PM
Score +28
Stuff like this is why I tend to not blacklist tags. This probably should be tagged as Vore for obvious reasons, but if I blacklisted Vore I wouldn't get to see something this nice.
Posted on 07 August 2021, 01:33 by:   danielwain     PM
Score +16
Seeing a gallery with misc:"poor grammar" fixed is a rare pleasure. Thanks a bunch!
Posted on 07 August 2021, 10:53 by:   unnoticed demon     PM
Score +18
@ P-dog
My advice if you don't like to block tags is to use the blacklist to colour the Tags you dislike and not block them,
that way it's easier to see the tags you don't like and they don't take you by surprise.
If you dislike something it will get to you more if it takes you by surprise.
Posted on 07 August 2021, 16:01 by:   麻麻我想百合     PM
Score +4
我不能接受这个,,,
Posted on 07 August 2021, 23:36 by:   Laser-Brain     PM
Score +11
I think this is oddly cute, especially the next to last page.
Posted on 08 August 2021, 13:53 by:   Evelyn13     PM
Score +17
The lack of a continuation is a crime against humanity. How am I supposed to live not knowing what happens next to this cute couple.
Posted on 08 August 2021, 16:25 by:   Leo Simoss     PM
Score +4
挺好的,这种也算百合吧

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