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[Morittokoke (Morikoke)] Kunrenhei no Junan | The Suffering of a Trainee (The Legend of Zelda) [English] [Lewd Rider Ero] [Digital]

[もりっとこけ (もり苔)] 訓練兵の受難 (ゼルダの伝説) [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2021-04-30 19:16
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Language:English  TR
File Size:41.80 MB
Length:29 pages
Favorited:730 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.67

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Posted on 30 April 2021, 19:16 by:   Lewd Rider Ero     PM
Uploader Comment
First upload
Posted on 30 April 2021, 19:23 by:   nasu     PM
Score +64
Posted on 30 April 2021, 20:40 by:   chaos-x     PM
Score +329
@Lewd Rider Ero
> You used the resampled archive instead of original size - That's bad
> From how it looks, you used paint - That's bad
> There is no actual typesetting - That's bad
> Grayscale png resaved as jpg - That's bad

You should've practiced and studied way way way more before tackling this, at least when it comes to your "editing". This is not how you get commissioned, this is how you scare away clients.
Posted on 01 May 2021, 01:25 by:   Silvenrose12     PM
Score +84
While I agree with the previous comments, I would like to reiterate that I, and many others, approve of new content. But seriously, typesetting makes or breaks things.
Posted on 01 May 2021, 01:28 by:   DOIHI3     PM
Score +48
lmao how can bottom tier translator like CGrascal able to edit and typeset better than this
Posted on 01 May 2021, 01:45 by:   NiceBoyTim     PM
Score +23
needs to be typeset and proofread
Last edited on 03 May 2021, 02:30.
Posted on 01 May 2021, 04:11 by:   saiox     PM
Score +44
Damn this was fast thanks!
edit: Well now I see why. Thanks for trying at least!
Posted on 02 May 2021, 17:00 by:   Shock the Monkey     PM
Score +18
It's not only the editing, the translation is pretty mediocre as well. Of course, new content and all that, but this would have definitely been translated much, much better by another group/person. Here's hoping someone decides to do it anyway.
Posted on 03 May 2021, 08:13 by:   Nicombust     PM
Score +6
This is hot, but why can't there be a slutty Link gangbang thats not abusive?
Posted on 04 May 2021, 15:53 by:   blue penguin     PM
Score +62

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