This one was commissioned by Benthic!

Translation by Spoog and typeset by Mylloux Delusion!

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Chinese version at http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1522787/fc60eaa4d5/

Painful to read. Lacks QC. Entire words are missing from sentences, mostly particles like [to, at, in]. Some sentences are just bad "actually would you giving it us as a reward, for saving you and all..." What even is that? And to top it off, not using apostrophes where needed on words like "let's" to mean "let us" and instead saying "lets" which means to allow. I feel sorry for the commissioner.

Last edited on 25 February 2021, 00:26.

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@imaliar Even a "bad" translation is a translation, iam happy about every Doujin i can understand because of a translation!

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>Chinese to English

No, this isn't Chinese to English, this is Japanese to Chinese to English. That isn't translation, that's fucking telephone, and it shows. No, a "bad" translation is not a translation because the point of a translation is to get the meaning across. You can't do that if it's shit. Whoever paid for this wasted their money.

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Pages 19 and 21: The "Quest Box" is revealed to actually be a "Request Box" (クエスト → リクエスト). Yet another (key) thing that didn't survive the double-translation. In fact, there are lots of things like that that never even left Japanese to begin with, but this one literally just requires knowing how to sound out katakana.

Stop paying for JP → CN → EN translations, please. I'd rather wait and get a better quality one, but this being out dashes the chances of getting a better quality translation in the future.

On a less negative note, I love this artist's stuff.

Last edited on 25 February 2021, 07:25.

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