WARNING
This translation was made using deepl, google translate, jisho.org and other sources.
Inaccuracies and mistranslations possible.
READING AT OWN RISK

Despite my warning this TL should be as close as you can make it to a good manmade TL without knowing japanese and it defintely should be much more accurate than a halfassed TL by a mediocre translator.
The japanese text went through 2 online translators and a word by word analyis by jisho.org and I also heavily looked at the french version by trad.agidyne.

If you find typos, weird wordings or mistranslations that need fixing, leave a comment send a PM or carrier pigeon (but the pidgeon has to quarantine for 14 days after arrival before I will read the message).

RAW: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/s/9976648a6e/1612863-325
French: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1779157/4cfc4260ee/

good translation I would say

Base +6, Narutlih +6, Hinks32 +6, PiePriate +6, SkullDraecos +4

rated it 0.5 for the arrogant attitude of thinking edited machine TLs are greater than a halfassed TL by a mediocre translator, but mostly for the fact that rewrite was in the title.

Base +9, pulsar577 -9, DarkTemplarXIII +6, illegalcheese -9, salfredo -8, ThatHaloDude -9, PiePriate -6, SkullDraecos -4, Flare_SMT -6, RAGE1 -14, 黒の鳳 -6, guilhermephoda -12, Scumbini +32

Might wanna add a netorase tag, too?

Base +6, PowerSlacker -7

I love it when Kuroiwa Menou does double penetration

Base +6