RAW: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1775124/dcbc4fd1e3/

Commissioned by: Anonymous

Translated by: HMC Translation
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http://dl.hentaiknight.work/?l=e-hentai/?f_search=hmc+translation

@Majala Are you aware that every single fucking bubble in this scanlation still has text inside? EVERY. SINGLE. BUBBLE. To prove it to you, I loaded page 4 in Photoshop and turned up the grey levels of my leveling layer to the max, and this is what I saw: https://viid.me/9Mw5t How do you fuck up the easiest part of editing, cleaning bubbles, THAT FUCKING BAD?!? And to repeat, every single page has leftover text that you didn't even take the 2 seconds to properly clean, because fuck it, right? And I've seen this exact same fucking problem in almost every single fucking gallery you have, so this isn't a new problem that's now just come to light. You've known about this for a while, but you just fucking plain ignored it, because again, fuck it, right?

From that same screenshot, you'll also see that this page is in RGB color instead of greyscale, and that the scan isn't leveled, not that you fucking care anyway. Your translation is equally fucking garbage, as it reads like a machine-translation or worse, OCR. And rather than take suggestions to have somebody QC your scanlations from previous galleries, you just straight up fucking ignored them and continued to put out the same fucking garbage, project after project after project. Your editing, "translating" (if you can call it that), and your outright refusal to take constructive criticism tells me all I need to know about you: that you're a fucking scam artist with the fucking audacity to ask people to pay you for this hot trash. I can safely say that all your commissioners and your 22 patrons on your Patreon page have been ripped off to the highest degree. You think your customers are fucking stupid, don't you? That they don't care for quality in what they paid their hard-earned money for? Well after this, I hope you lose all your business, because you have no fucking right to demand people pay for this trash, not when there are thousands of other scanlations out there that are much better and nobody had to pay a single cent for them!

All of the above is meant as a warning to your potential victims. DO NOT COMMISSION THIS GUY FOR ANY REASON! He will take your money, put out garbage, and laugh at you while he does so. Predators like you preying upon unsuspecting people who don't know any better make me fucking sick.

EDIT: Jesus fuck, Majala. Are you seriously asking me why clean text bubbles really fucking matter? You really don't know shit about competent editing and translating. And for your information, you can zoom in on ANY bubble in this gallery and still see the raw text. All the more fucking reason to avoid you like the plague: because you don't fucking care about standards in scanlating. You put out your McHentai just to get paid as quick as possible and fuck over your commissioners/patrons with your shit work. Your response just reinforces my belief that you are a fucking con artist scamming people out of their hard-earned money.

Last edited on 14 December 2020, 13:37.

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@THDragon

No, I don't know about the lingering texts in the bubbles because I never turned it to grayscale and max out the layer but why does it even matter? Are you gonna be using this for another editing? When the backgrounds are all white, you can't see those at all with the naked eyes right? It's not meant for re-editing right? Or is there like a good reason to do so?

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Hey don't worry about it mate. I don't see the text at all. That fucking elitist is just looking for an excuse to whine about shit.

I understood what was going on, the text is clear enough, the English is decent.

It's a fucking hentai for degenerates, not a goddamn scientific essay. This is more than enough.

On topic, well I guess it's not a bad one. It's different than the usual drivel of MC gets transformed then gets absolute raped and becomes a retard at the end.

I wish to find one of these where the MC gets his revenge and end up winning significantly more than a dick addiction, though. But oh well what can I expect from degenerates?

All in all it's a decent work.

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WTF even is that comment by THDragon? Who the fuck turns up the greyscale like that when reading fucking porn? Better question is actually why so many people + rated it? Do ya'll seriously fucking do that, or is your monitor so poorly setup that shit shows up when viewing it normal? Cause yall need to fix that shit if you are seeing it.

Onto the actual work in question. I have yet to see a ckj comic where I didn't unambiguously put it in the "great" column and this one doesn't disappoint either.

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Dude'/s way overreacting, jesus.
if you're reading through it like a regular person the lingering text is virtually unnoticeable. Hell even when I zoom In the shits so faint I wouldn't notice if I wasn't actively searching for it.
The english is decent and the effort to make it look fine is there too.
If I cared enough to pay for a god damn hentai scanlation then I'd take it no problem.

Though I will admit I am curious about the process behind it, whenever I try scanlating i just throw a white back layer in gimp and cut out the bubbles with a quick lasso

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@THDragon Jesus christ, calm down. Yes, there's a residual text, no, you can't see it unless you're looking at the page at an angle from below.

No need to be writing a rant because of that, you could tell the guy "Hey, there's some text residue left, maybe you need to fix that." and be done with it.

Don't be an asshole.

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If you don't mind me asking Majala, how did you actually manage to do that? Very interested in learning about new ways of cleaning like that. Personally, even if the text is still there as residue, the end result comes out as a "Clean" bubble and that is undeniable.

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I’d be more inclined to complain about the multiple grammatical errors and the handful of odd translation choices than the typesetting. I’d pass it by a QC guy before releasing next time, that way you can catch the little things like that and release at a higher quality.

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@God Reven @logger666

I simply use..... an eraser tool (#FFFFF) on every box with white background..... and vice versa on black box... though I never knew it left a residue like that when heavily zoom in. Today, when I tried again using the very same erasor... it somehow is able to remove the residue so I don't know why it didn't do that the first time.

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Why are they surprised someone who was a guy 30s earlier "still" has their hymen??

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