the patreon logo is even worse censorship than lightsaber penis

Base +6, Jago Smith +8, shrö +6, 60sunsets +5, beast5200 +7, sovair11 +6, Reich123 +6, doomzero00 +6

Nigga if you ain't showing us shit then don't upload it

Base +4, Jago Smith +8, Reich123 +6, doomzero00 +6

The text in page 1, panel 3 has no background, making it very difficult to read. There are also a few typos, like page 2 panel 1 "crawl over here like a good good." Around page 5 the text gets so small that it's hard to read with the small resolution of the images.

I realize the 1-starring is mainly because of the Patreon-bait censorship, but even besides that, there are some issues you should address if you want to attract buyers for this.

Base +8

The renders and lighting is very good, but you have to work on your presentation.
The censoring completely ruins it, it's not going to encourage anyone to support your patreon.

Base +9