Native english? not translated from other language?
p.24 It should be "I only remember that semen wouldn't came out even if they kept squeezing it out..." instead of "I only remember that semen came out even if they kept squeezing it out..." cause "I only remember that semen came out even if they kept squeezing it out..." = he could still create semen whenever they squeezing him, which is nothing to talk about.