Yo!

If there's any translation suggestion/improvement you may have, feel free to mention it!

For those who have a thing for higher-res pics, I've uploaded the torrent with upscaled images (although I don't keep it up-to-date). ;P

Of course, feel free to drop by at Kourney's Twitter and do consider supporting them!

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Artist Twitter page: https://viid.me/9Mw5p

Artist Fur Affinity page: https://ouo.io/HUgg6g

The original(in CN):http://dl.hentaiknight.work/?l=e-hentai/g/1683429/2dbb454b56/

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Big thanks to @harry1957, @ted40905 and@SleepyRererered for the useful info and translation corrections!

Hate to say this, but the artist did put 3 pages English version of this.
https://ouo.io/A4O1up

And some Taiwanese is translating it already.
https://ouo.io/lnCkZnj

But you did a really good job filling the sub into the bubble.
That's nice. Thanks a lot.

PS: the artist is Kourney, the one who did this comic
http://dl.hentaiknight.work/?l=e-hentai/g/1586611/0b6c8f7c3f/
can someone add the tag

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On P3,
a. The king of XXX, It means no kingdom, but an action the king did: reclaiming. (regaining, repossessing, retrieve, etc.)
b. And, I think simple "a great emperor" is better than "one of the kind" here, cuz he will mention how is he different from image of a normal emperor.

P5,
Upper-left dialogue, what Alex does is greeting to Ludo's dick, not Ludo himself.

P6,
First scene, what Alex says should be like "YOU are the one who taught me these," "Are you not?" It seems more specific imo.
Scene 2, Ludo: "At least......"
Scene 3, "Not at here......"

P7,
Lower-left dialogue, what the king says to Rudo should be: "Even you said so, your down-there became rock-hard" things like that.

P8,
Lower right, "Not so fast (to end the intercourse), Ludo......"

P10,
The white bear: "He deserves it."

P11,
Regid's monologue in second scene: "Ahem Ahem, anyway......"

P15,
The noise is supposed to refer to Regid banging the king imo...so I would support a triple SLAP here instead of knocking sound.

P16,
"Moving on" could be "Here it comes", followed by "the conclusion of today's lesson". I think the word conclusion will be closer, since it makes sense in both lecturing and sex.

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Hahahahah ZTE is a misunderstanding.Google translated so because it's also a Chinese corperation's name.In the comic,中兴 is the emperor's title,not the kingdom's name.The author came up with this name probably just wanted to generalize the history of Alex's achievements.
And i think this might help with your tranalation: I rederred to a dictionary and found the meaning of “中兴”：【Revive to thrive after the decline】
(衰败后又重新兴盛起来)
(如果有更好的翻译烦请贡献一下哦)

And here's my advice(i'm so bad at describing the dialogues' positions hope it wont bother):
P3:lefr side of the downer place of the middle part,Regid's monologue:"It's rare to see such a great emperor like him,except for his...some not-that-great hobby"

P5:In the upper-left Alex's words,i think you can directly translate “小鲁德” into "Little Ludo",which both means the cock and the general

P6：Upper-left dialogue,replace the previous tranalation with "Aren't you the one who taught me to do this" could be more appropriate,as the original sentence is also an emphatic sentence.

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Thanks for all the info, you guys!

I couldn't resist as there were a lot of things to fix so I did it right away... I've fixed it all up while following the context of the first 3 EN pages by Kourney and the translation corrections you guys shared (thanks again).

As for the SFX, I generally "avoid" the term Slap and use Clap instead ( in all the translations I do...I don't know why exactly, but it sounds weird for me).

As for the Taiwanese translation, I hadn't seen it anywhere and I can't seem to enter u18chan ("Access Denied") for some reason (???).

In the end, I guess this can be left as a "sneak-peek"/"spoiler" until the artist provides their own translation of the latest pages. Not to mention it's good redraw training. xD

Last edited on 18 July 2020, 15:57.

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his name in Chinese could be“柯尼”（sounds like a little boy:-D）or“科尼”（i prefer the first one😃）

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Would you please to add some kind of cover images from this http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1686585/52693147be/ ?

Last edited on 18 July 2020, 15:32.

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❤️❤️❤️

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No problem. I'll do it with the next page so I don't spam with gallery updates).

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Nice. I uploaded it here in the first place hoping someone would translate it.

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It's like King's Play by Bomb, but infinitely better.

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Individually, they are weak like a single twig.
But, as a bundle, they form a mighty faggot.

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评论功能取消了吗？

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