Now with full res images!

Comments are welcome hit us up at:
https://ouo.io/3iqU2v
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Thanks to gansta for the cleaning:
http://dl.hentaiknight.work/?l=e-hentai/g/1669904/e3f6ad0590/

Raw: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1565644/5a8c63035a/

Okay, great. Full res images is one improvement.

Now you can start working on your typesetting skills as next step. It's not completely s*** but it's not good either.
1. the fontsize is way to big. Give your text some room to breath and don't try to completely fill the bubbles because that doesn't look. 3/4 of your actual fontsize would probably have been enough for this.
2. don't let short words like it, is, to, be, I, etc stand alone on a line for no good reason. They will feel lonely and like Bob Roos always said. "Everybody needs a friend".

You should read some typesetting guides like this: https://viid.me/9Mecy

Last edited on 22 October 2020, 20:12.

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Thanks for the translation!!

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