Kindly commissioned by Anonymous

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Thanks for reading

Huh when I read the raw I thought it was Zepar with the surprise comeback which did Kiara in. Cool to know that Melt had the last laugh.

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Please get a proofreader. Your translation is littered with grammatical errors and misspellings.
As an aside, I cannot fathom why non-Japanese ESLs who are not fluent in either language charge commissions, nor the individuals who pay for such commissions. For the former, is it to gain proficiency or money? Both? For the latter is it low standards? Desperation? Maybe someone who has commissioned an equivalently poor work can enlighten me.

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