Goddamn, the poor grammar is driving me nuts, this sloppy work was probably done with google translate or some shit.

I know I shouldn't bite the hands that feeds me but these sloppy works should be called out, otherwise they won't improve if we praise this type of shit.

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Page 1: "uh oh... it's so stiff, isn' it"
misspelt "isn't"

Page 2: "how about put dick inside, and become a father?"
Missing subject.

Page 2: "ahh.. here it is... it's good super~~~"
Either missing a comma between two adjectives or they're separate sentences missing punctuation.

Page 3: "allowances of two months"
Incorrect preposition but would be better rephrased.

Page 3: "in the convenience store I went in accident"
Missing comma and goes in a circle so it's confusing.

Page 3: "what are you doing with a desperate face"
It's a rhetorical question, but here she seems to be asking him. Could be better phrased as "Ara? [lol] What a desperate face."

Page 4: "and... how about your appreciate?"
"Appreciate" should be a noun.

Page 4: "feel ashamed"
The mangaka is being a little harsh on us now.

Page 5: "more and more often met her in the convenience store"
Missing subject again.

Page 5: "eh? met again!"
Not exactly the functional language we use for that.

Page 5: "more and more often home together"
Missing subjects.

Base +3, dankestdungeon +18, Beyond Imagination +6, Lostalgia +9, GeniusDuck +6

Why are people rating this so high. Sorry but this is trash. Why do people think uploads like this are accetable. Also tag it as a rewrite too.

Last edited on 14 July 2020, 13:14 UTC.

Base +9, chexusai +6, Beyond Imagination +6, freevipe +6

It shouldn't be a big mystery that most people who rate everything 5 stars, thank for the good translation, and like the page 17 x-ray aren't actually reading the bad uploads.

Base +9

What language is this???

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