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[Mokuzou] Etsuko-san wa Machi no Minna no Onahole (comic KURiBERON DUMA 2018-03 Vol. 07) [English] [Digital]

[杢臓] 悦子さんは町のみんなのオナホール (COMIC クリベロン DUMA 2018年3月号 Vol.07) [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2020-07-14 08:39
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:5.48 MB
Length:14 pages
Favorited:132 times
Rating:
70
Average: 2.75

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Posted on 14 July 2020, 10:14 UTC by:   xZabuzax     PM
Score +37
Goddamn, the poor grammar is driving me nuts, this sloppy work was probably done with google translate or some shit.

I know I shouldn't bite the hands that feeds me but these sloppy works should be called out, otherwise they won't improve if we praise this type of shit.
Posted on 14 July 2020, 10:23 UTC by:   Dead-chan     PM
Score +42
Page 1: "uh oh... it's so stiff, isn' it"
misspelt "isn't"

Page 2: "how about put dick inside, and become a father?"
Missing subject.

Page 2: "ahh.. here it is... it's good super~~~"
Either missing a comma between two adjectives or they're separate sentences missing punctuation.

Page 3: "allowances of two months"
Incorrect preposition but would be better rephrased.

Page 3: "in the convenience store I went in accident"
Missing comma and goes in a circle so it's confusing.

Page 3: "what are you doing with a desperate face"
It's a rhetorical question, but here she seems to be asking him. Could be better phrased as "Ara? [lol] What a desperate face."

Page 4: "and... how about your appreciate?"
"Appreciate" should be a noun.

Page 4: "feel ashamed"
The mangaka is being a little harsh on us now.

Page 5: "more and more often met her in the convenience store"
Missing subject again.

Page 5: "eh? met again!"
Not exactly the functional language we use for that.

Page 5: "more and more often home together"
Missing subjects.
Posted on 14 July 2020, 10:44 UTC by:   tealsack     PM
Score +27
Why are people rating this so high. Sorry but this is trash. Why do people think uploads like this are accetable. Also tag it as a rewrite too.
Last edited on 14 July 2020, 13:14 UTC.
Posted on 14 July 2020, 12:38 UTC by:   Lewdovico     PM
Score +9
It shouldn't be a big mystery that most people who rate everything 5 stars, thank for the good translation, and like the page 17 x-ray aren't actually reading the bad uploads.
Posted on 14 July 2020, 17:34 UTC by:   arkot     PM
Score +10
What language is this???

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