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i just ordered this game so its fitting that i randomly find smut of it, carry on :)

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The dialogue is grating beyond all belief. There is never not a pun in every single word bubble, and it would have been fine if it was once in a while, but that's all they fucking do.

Base +6, CompleteWeirdo -5, gamefuel143 -6

@Daneasaur: sorry :/. we had seen lots of people enjoying the puns, even saying it was fantastic, so we didn't think it was that big of a deal~.

Base +6, Blake81 +12

Puns are great if thats the style you are going for, though if you want a longer story, recommend dropping them less frequently, try every 2 or 3 pages and see how it goes. :)

Worst case scenario you don't have to think up quite so many puns and have more time to set them up, forming more in depth jokes instead of puns.

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