My quick and dirty attempt at improving the previous atrocious English translation.

I know it's not perfect, so feel free to point out any mistakes left, I was in a hurry to un-fuck that disaster. Athletic girls with tanlines deserve a somewhat readable translation.

If people are OK with my job, I might work on the previous chapter too.

Check for yourself how atrocious it was:

Previous English translation: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1575826/dc394ff605/
Raw: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1570491/62b4f0312d/

Part 1 as previous English translation: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1575832/414f6fa8cb/
Raw of part 1: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1570561/c93f378873/

Base +43, clamdown +7, Rockerfella +6

Not perfect, but already better and more readable than that crap from before

Base +7, Monster-Girl Lover +7

You are a gentleman and a scholar!

Base +6