3rd published translation

This one took me way too damn long to make, but I think it was worth the time.
This is the first time I edited background text as well, so any feedback is more than welcome!
Hope you enjoy :)

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Disclaimer:
Firstly, I do not own any of the artwork that I post, I merely translate it. All the credit goes to the creators.
Secondly, I do not post anything for commercial use, this is just a hobby of mine.
Thirdly, I'm no expert in Japenese by any means, so my translations might not always be correct.

RAW: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1358270/d0aa746e49/

Base +42, s4r +7, supersayan +6, Lostalgia +9

"Elina.. that girl's panties are visible again" > "This guy is looking at Elina's panties again."
"What about you, are you a vigrin?" > she is not asking him, she is teasing by wondering if she should give him the favor of letting him fuck her (however, only if he gave her 100k).
ひーど means 酷い not "crap".
"I just promised cooked rice! didin't I!?" > are you sure you are not using google translate? because it's really obvious she didn't promised "cooked rice" but is talking about sharing a meal like you do when you practice enkou.
"It's going to be cooked rice today" LMAO

Base +16, Pr1de +16, bigmak +6, mickl3 +6, Animefan268 +6, DazWolf +6, Ragna25 +5, Lostalgia +9, PinguPrin +7, kaomaru +10, dankestdungeon +16, mugen_darkness +9

@Bulopu I use jisho.org among other things. I'm still a self-learning beginner at Japanese so I'm taking a lot of time with each translation, figuring out how to convert the sentence in the best possible way.
Had no idea about 'enkou', this wasn't so obvious to me sadly.
Is there a place you know of where I can get feedback before publishing a translation?
Thanks for letting me know about the mistakes. Appreciated and noted :)

Base +3, supersayan +6, Ragna25 +5, dankestdungeon -16

Since the dude manage to steal the girl can it be classified as netori or is it doesn't count since her bf broke up with her.

Base +6, Lostalgia +9, Vanguard3125 +6

people don't know how to appreciate cooked rice these days

Base +5, DazWolf +6, Lostalgia +9, 58569 +9, denisko616 +6, alkopone +6

I've been cooking rice wrong

TBH this translation method made my duwang feels good

Base +10, xnon1 +6, PinguPrin +7, dankestdungeon -16

So wait, did the netori vanilla scene actually happen or was that all just a concussion dream after the old guy KO'd him for interfering? It looks like it's the protag having a "good dream" at the end.

Base +6, xnon1 +6, Vanguard3125 +6

@Notalent I think the ex-boyfriend just beat him up after the video was sent to him. Seems everything happened was real, given the last panel.

Base +7, Zeratoth +6, Vanguard3125 +6

This technically isn't cheating. When the guy got punched he dreamed the whole thing. That's why the guy is sleeping on the floor happy.

Base +6