Shitty TL here.

As promised, here's the Kaname Doujin I translated a while back and uploaded on /d/.
I've said before and I'll say it again, I am in no way proficient in Japanese but I did my best to do what I can to make it as accurate as possible.

Enjoy

First of all, I can't read a word of Japanese, so I can't say how accurate this is to the original script. That being said, I think you did a pretty good job.

As long as the text appears to match the images, and has legible grammar, most people won't mind too much about how accurate the translation is.

Base +13, Vile Mk 2 -10

>self inserting as the newly transformed monster girl

nice

Base +11