[Yuzuponz (Kikira)] Wagaya ni Sumitsuita Tanuki Musume o Omowazu Suikan Shite Shimatta Hanashi | The story of a raccoon girl who spontaneously fell asleep and got fucked at my place. [English] {bfrost} [Digital]

[ゆずぽん酢 (ききら)] 我が家に住みついた狸娘を思わず睡姦してしまった話 [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:	2019-08-13 14:38
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Visible:	Yes
Language:	English TR
File Size:	19.03 MB
Length:	16 pages
Favorited:	384 times

Rating:		94
Average: 4.47

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Posted on 13 August 2019, 14:38 UTC by: bfrost

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Translated and edited by me.
Raws:
http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/988860/f1fd59c646/

Posted on 13 August 2019, 15:09 UTC by: Siperi

Overall an enjoyable story, but there are a few grammatical errors in the translation.

Page 2, panel 2 - not sure if it's his way of talking or if you forgot the 2nd G in getting.
Page 3, panel 2 - past simple tense with did uses base form of the verb, so here it should be bewitch, not bewitched.
Page 5, panel 3 - same as above. It should be did I WAKE her up, not did I woke her up.
Page 11, panel 2 - same issue as on page 5.

Posted on 13 August 2019, 15:44 UTC by: Cacy

额头那里原来是眉毛吗？

Posted on 13 August 2019, 15:49 UTC by: bfrost

@Siperi
Yep, sorry about that. English is not my mother tongue. I went to the forum a few days ago asking for a volunteer willing to proofread this but had no luck. :/

Posted on 13 August 2019, 17:04 UTC by: the missing link

a raccoon is fine too

Posted on 13 August 2019, 23:08 UTC by: beckylemmesmash

Amazing girl, amazing doujin, but that censorship is way too big :/

Posted on 14 August 2019, 23:19 UTC by: Megaton

@bfrost:
Feel free to PM me directly next time. Depending on what other projects I am working on it might take a couple or few days.

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language:	english translated
parody:	original
group:	yuzuponz
artist:	kikira
male:	sole male
female:	bbw big breasts closed eyes furry kemonomimi nakadashi raccoon girl sleeping sole female tail thick eyebrows
misc:	full color mosaic censorship